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Ditz


Technically not procrastinating.

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Pinkie makes Rarity confront her past.

With a forgotten, very late addition of a reading by Midnight29 right here!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Oh, that was fantastic!

I CAN'T SAY IT. . . I CAN'T SAT IT, , ,I can't say it. . .I can't say it I can't say it That Rocked!


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Funtastic!

6076353 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :raritystarry:

That was actually rather funny for such a short piece :rainbowlaugh:
I only spotted one mistake...

"Yeah, sure, but.... Why are the couches here for?"

You should either remove the 'for' or change the 'why' to a 'what'. Apart from that it was great

6077289 Glad you liked it. And fixed!

now all we need is a clopfic staring tom and rarity. "I slowly slid my pebbles into..."

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Okay, but... what are the couches for? c.c

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