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Bendy
I like big ponies and I cannot lie.
Bendy
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Glorious.
nice as always bendy
This... this is...
Terrible.
I get that this is intended as satire, and is aimed at some of the worse tropes that are often seen here. But it's so horrifically over the top that it comes across less as poking fun at idiot story lines, and more like bashing the reader over the head with the author's own ideology. The use of second person just exacerbates this issue.
Then there's the "Random" section. I think it was an attempt at humor, and at the time of this review there are 4 upvotes, so someone found it funny... but I simply don't understand why. It's as if the author started typing random words into the story, strung them into sentences, and called it humor.
The worst part? There was a great story idea hidden in here. If the author had explored the whole "human gets pulled to an Equestria where they love their sexy humans, but is such a misogynist that they punt him right back" it could have been a hit.
5996993
I have to agree with you on this. Maybe it could've been much longer, but he accepts the logic of a universe without problems.
PS: The show has pretty bad stuff happen (not including premieres/finales). The parasprites were a big example as well as timberwolves. Equestria is a big enough place. Who knows what Manehattan's like, or the Canterlot slums.
Anon you're such a sad, sad sack of shit...
. Those must be sad worlds, if everyone in it's been assimilated into one singular being.
5996993
Take note, most what I write is terrible, but I write it anyway because I find it entertaining.
That said if you feel this story has so much potential (under an entirely different name if you wish) you or some other actually good writer could take a jab at this concept and make a decent story out of it.
5997418
I admit, their world has its own problems. Clearly not enough problems through, because it doesn't stop hardcord misanthropes wishing the death (or turned into ponies) of the entire human and Earth turned into Equestria
5997716
mil Gibson, so like that family guy episode?
5997418
>implying tornados aren't worse, and parasprites can be easily handled
timberwolves? Pfft! easy to deal with, compared to things that would eat you alive much more effectively.
Holy shit, that was beautiful.
i woke up with this
and....I FUCKING LIKE IT
.
5998109
Glad you enjoyed. May I ask way?
5998470
Glad you liked it. May I ask why did you like it?
5999565 People always write fanfic where the protagonist is a misanthrope that have been bullied all is life and all that fun stuff
.They're always saying things like
"Equestria is such a peaceful place.Humanity suck,there's war everywhere"and 1 chapter after,they get attacked and got to kill something.
So what im trying to say is that i like when someone point it out and make a random comedy out of it
Oh and there's always this guy who say "Oh no i can't have sex with ponies.its bestiality" and not long after this they start to fuck everypony like a nymphomaniac on ecstasy.
and lets be honest,i dont think the first thing a pony would say if they see a human would be"OMG i ABSOLUTLY need/want to jump his bone".I dont think they would hate us but that doesn't mean they'll start to f**k with humans.
Anyway i liked it because its was hilarious and it was pointing things that we always see in HIE in a more laughable and exagerated way
Hope its not to long and sorry if my writing suck.Its been a long day
5997984
Challenge accepted
I can't believe she didn't even mention the universe of evil teletubbies that wanted all sexy humans to become teletubbies. That trumps the Bieber aliens.
6024793
Yeah... I should have referenced that.
Did you like that story that featured the teletubbies invading Earth to turn humans into teletubbies?
6024813 YEAH
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