After years of training, Rainbow Dash is finally ready to join the Wonderbolts. The only thing she has left to do is to go through Spitfire and Soarin's initiation.
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Rainbow Dash looks hot in that pic.
how fun
Somebody had fun.
Well then. I am please. (In more ways than one )
Man, I say this a lot to you, but you never cease to write good stories. Albeit this one not as engaging as some others, but I am going to read any of your stories that you post, regardless of whether or not it's clop.
...I seriously need to stop saying this stuff on every one of your fics lol
RainbowxSoarinxSpitfire is one of the few OT3s I like, and this story didn't disappoint. Awesome read, man!
Wow. Um. That was the first clop story I've ever read... and it was totally hot O_o The prose was exactly where I wanted it to be, communicative without being sparse, detailed without being overindulgent. I got a sense of the characters through their dialogue as well, which means you articulated them really well.
I loved the way you did a bunch of different things in the one encounter. I felt like you could have cut some of the introduction, as the build up to the actual sex was a little too long for me... but worth it once I got there :x My only other thought is that I really would have liked to have more dialogue during the sex parts, especially from Rainbow Dash. I think it's really sexy when characters can't control themselves and end up babbling stuff while they're getting... uh. Anyway. :x
Great story, thanks so much for posting it! I really enjoyed it. :3
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Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You always find the perfect picture.
Nice story. There's something astonishingly hot about a girl fingering another girl's asshole right after it's been stretched out by a cock and pumped full of cum.
Geez, poor RD. I mean that's a lot to go through, she's probably gonna be super sore in the morning.
So, uh... Why not put the 'too' in italics?
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Because that's my message to myself to put it in italics when I go through and edit it, and I totally forgot to do that.
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Heh, at least it's been caught, eh?
Oops, forgot to fave. Very hot, though. I enjoyed this, mate.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Happy to hear that.
Well that was hot. Now all you need is a sequel where Twilight and Fleetfoot get involved in initiating Rainbow. Or they initiate Twilight. I'm not picky.
OMG that initiation is so hot. lesbian sex my favrits.
i wanna be in a initiation like that <3
Soarin just sounds so done with this.
That... was... awesome!