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Passion and Violence
Just a writer that's head over heels in love. I specialize in violence... currently working on passion.
Passion and Violence
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this story is interesting.
when are you planning to post the next chapter? 
I'm actually working on it right now!
nice I had literally just went to the previous page then saw u updated
I actually thought of an even BETTER idea... hang tight!
5889026 Oh my god. Change the main character from your blatant self insert. This is sad and actually very bad.
Okay... Time for a little light.
Blaze is currently suffering MAJOR PTSD, being in Tartarus nullified it, but upon returning home... It came back in full swing.
*sees the coverart*
i love it
5889070 Learn what the reply button is.
5889070 It helps if you use the reply function.
i.imgur.com/AsPjB57.png
5889190 Thanks mate.
Oh god I have a seriously bad premonition about this.
5890017 You have no idea.
5891267 I'm actually thinking about that!
PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME
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There are two types of ponies...
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the sane and those who live in ponyville?
....sorry i just imagined tirek right there.....
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I don't blame you.
Interesting fact! That whole chapter was done in one sitting and with little to no planning.
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I would like to know what you think now.
.....me.....as long as it isnt bananas
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If you have any story requests, just message me!
Felt a little rushed with a few grammatical errors. But good!
-TheNightShade
Try to pace things. To me, it feels too fast, too bunched up, and too rigid. What you need to try and do is add more details, like his cutiemark, for instance. Don't just say it's a phoenix, DESCRIBE IT.
Other than that, loved the wibbly wobbly stuff!
-TheNightShade
Really fun but with a few obvious grammatical errors and a GIGANTIC plot hole: isn't Blaze supposed to be recovering? Given the fact of what happened in the first chapter.....
-TheNightShade
Interesting........
-TheNightShade
(ps Suddenly MALICE!)