This story is a sequel to A House is Not a Home
Upon observing the sorrow and solitude of Fall's everyday life in the orphanage, Pint dedicates himself to doing all he can to help the young filly find happiness.
In this adventure, Pint and Bucky sneak Fall out of the orphanage for an entire day in town. How will her first time doing so many things other fillies and colts take for granted go?
This story was written for Ari Angelcub. Fall, Pint, Bucky, and the artwork for this story all belong to Ari An Angelcub. You can learn more about her and her characters by visiting http://ari-angelcub.tumblr.com/.
Chapters (5)
nice so far
"Oh ob" 1st chapter top----Oh no?
& "did your apple in it" 3rd chapter near bottom---------dip.
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Oh, no! And I thought I had properly proofread the whole thing, too. :( Rats!
Thanks for the heads-up. I'll try to fix that straight away. :)
i just LOVE this story
but it is criminally underated seriously this should have WAY more likes
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The arts, especially writing, are tremendously subjective. It doesn't help that I'm pretty much an unknown in the Brony / Pony community either. :)
It means a lot to Ari, who is the creator of the series, to get her story and characters out there. I've taken a very strong liking to them as I've worked to develop the series and hope to help her take it as far as I can. So much growth occurs for Fall thanks to the friendships she's made with Pint, Bucky, and new characters who have yet to appear. :)