• Published 1st Mar 2015
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Equestria Girls: The Friendship Games - Caesar Orzell 600



At this year's Friendship Games, the Canterlot Wondercolts are determined to beat the Shadowbolts! However, when a new girl arrives bearing resemblances to an old friend, the Mane 6 are thrown off guard.

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9. We Are the Champions!

When the girls got to the mirror, Twilight wasn't there yet, luckily.

"Okay, guys." Sunset Shimmer said, getting everyone's attention. "Twilight and her friends originally beat Discord and Nightmare Moon with these. I'll put the necklaces on each of you, and I'll wear the crown."

At that moment, Sunset realized that she was going to wear the crown. At one time in her life, she had wanted it!

And now, she held it in her hands.

Sunset had to blush.

The first necklace she needed to was Pinkie Pie. "You're the element of laughter...that's pretty self-explanatory."

"Well, duh!" said Pinkie. When she got her necklace, she examined it. "Sparkly!"

"Rainbow Dash, loyalty. Applejack, honesty. Rarity, generosity. Fluttershy, kindness. And me...magic."

Right as she put on the crown, Twilight flew onto the scene, and hot on her trail was Vinyl Scratch in her car.

"Guys!" she yelled. "Twilight's been brainwashing everyone! They're after you!"

Sunset's face read "oh crap."

"Now what?" Whispered Rainbow Dash nervously.

"Uh, you need to put on your necklace." Sunset whispered back.

"Oh, yeah."

As everyone else put on their necklaces, they all ponied up! Pony ears and tails appeared, as well as wings for Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.

While this was happening, Twilight was trying to brainwash Vinyl Scratch and Octavia, who were in Vinyl's car.

"Why is it not working!?" Twilight whined.

That was because Vinyl was using her headphones, which was blasting dubstep music in them. Octavia was also listening to music, but of a different kind.

"YOU CANNOT RESIST THE POWER OF THE WUBS!" Vinyl screeched in a tone deaf tone. It was so bad that Octavia, who was listening to her own music full blast, was startled.

Disgusted, Twilight gave up and turned her attention towards Sunset Shimmer, who yelled, "hey Twilight!"

Sunset was waving her hands toward the flying Twilight in the sky. "Try to brainwash us."

The girl rolled her eyes. "Really? Why would I even try? I'm too smart for that."

"Looks like she she's gonna be hard to reform," mumbled Fluttershy.

Sunset gestured to the girls' hands to hold them.

Then, when they held hands, they too floated into the air, reaching Twilight's level.

"Hey, what are you doing?" screamed Twilight angrily. She then blast a ball of purple smoke at them. Luckily, the girls were protected by an orb of light that ended up bouncing the purple smoke off it-and it went right back to Twilight.

"Ahhhhh!"

Just then, her wings vanished and so did her pretty outfit, leaving her a hopeless human in a garish uniform falling in the now afternoon sky.

"I've got her!" called out a voice from below.

It was Flash Sentry, ready to catch her.

The six girls floated back to the ground, turning back to normal right as they took of their jewelry. Sunset safely put them back in the box and pushed it through the mirror. She then started to write her letter back to Twilight.

Dear Princess Twilight,

Yay! We got Twilight back to normal! It's all thanks to you and the elements. Now it's time to talk some sense into her!

Your friend, Sunset Shimmer.

P.S. I saw Flash Sentry!

"Hey Twilight," said Flash to Twilight, blushing. "I hope I didn't catch you at the wrong time."

Twilight snorted, jumping from his arms. "Uh, yeah. About that."

Flash raised an eyebrow, curious. "What was going on back there? You were literally flying in the air. Was that apart of the games?"

"Uh-ah-no...I mean yes, on. Shoot! Where were you, though? I thought I brainwashed you."

"Well, I saw DJ and Octavia leaving the arena so I followed them. She made me jump into the backseat of her car and she handed me a music player and a pair of earbuds."

"Oh."

"Hey, Twilight!" Sunset Shimmer, at the time, finished writing her letter. "Why did you do that?" She said the last sentence more calmly, and seriously.

"Do what? Oh, that. I just wanted the Shadowbolts to win, that's all. I feel terrible if they don't. I'm sorry." she pouted.

"It's okay," Sunset smiled. "I did far worse things at this school, trust me." she giggled.

"I know. No off-"

"None taken."

Somehow, at the same time, both Pinkie and Vinyl yelled "group hug!"

Sunset turned around to look at Vinyl and Octavia. "When did you two get out?"

"Right as you were talking," said Octavia. "That took some time to do, right?" she looked at Sunset and Twilight affectionately.

Everyone nodded and did the group hug-even Flash Sentry.

"Now what about those awards?" joked Rainbow Dash. "I wonder who they go to, huh?"

Twilight looked flustered. "I don't think we're the winners today. I think you guys are. I realize that now."

Suddenly, Principal Celestia's voice was heard, echoing from the arena. "Alright, everyone! Time to hand out the awards!"

After that, everyone separated and were ready to go back to the arena.

"Time to not get those awards!" Shouted Pinkie, hopping on her tippy toes. "Woo-hoo!"

She then turned to the non-existent audience.

"Those guys didn't even realize that there's only four days left of school left!"

Author's Note:

Woot-woot! Time to celebrate! I finished my first story on here! Yay! :yay:
Now what? Well, there's gonna be another story. Not an Equestria Girls one, as the end of the story hinted at (at least not yet), but a crossover...one that you will not be familiar with unless you're Canadian or have good taste in older TV shows. Get hype! :derpytongue2:

Comments ( 25 )

*applauds* Wait, why is it over? MOAR! :derpytongue2: Good run! :twilightsmile:

5754127

Couldn't have said it better myself!:twilightsmile:

5758149
Thank you! Hopefully more soon... I'm kind of having a writer's block right now. :facehoof:

5758317 Well, I hope you find something to cure it!

WOO-HOO!!! YEAH!!!

*Fist pump! ~Totally AWESOME!!!~

This is how AWESOME I feel about this right now!:

~It's always a GOOD TIME!!!

Woah-oh-oh-oh-oh, oh-oh-oh!

5758328
Aww, thanks. :heart:
This is how I feel right now:

5760984
Oh, I checked out your Deviantart page by the way... lovin' it. :twilightsmile:

Excuse me. I like most of the story. However, that ending (sigh) .......

I don't know how you end this story. I mean it's so anti-climatic.

When you work on other stories, leave the anti-cimaticness out of them .

5766898
I actually apologize for the ending. I'm not really good at ending stories. :pinkiesad2:
Do you have any suggestions on how to end my story properly?

5767408
I have a friend who's obsessed with Sonic, so it was inevitable. :twilightsheepish:

I though Twilight would be all dismissive of the whole thing something like

"Meh, I was bored. Thought I'd try out harvesting other worldly power"

Oh well, nice story :raritywink:

5769608
Hah! Good idea! I never thought of that one.
And thanks. :rainbowlaugh:

5903583
I don't understand what you mean by this. :twilightsheepish:
I'm excited too, I guess.

6651522
Hm, not bad! :trixieshiftright: I'm more a Foreigner girl.

6651509
Blonde hair? Oops, I forgot to fix that.
pre10.deviantart.net/c7ed/th/pre/f/2015/161/5/3/genuine_indigo_zap_by_uotapo-d8wq6aq.jpg
I thought the girl on the left was her... oops.

Ummm..I going to be honest. this was...well overly rushed and ...sighs...overly rushed and some other stuff too afraid to say.
Sorry, but it made my head hurt trying to read this story.

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I know, I wish I could rewrite and make it better. :fluttershyouch:

6813658 I think you can

7191164
I'm the worst writer ever because I'm too lazy too. :fluttershysad:

All this needs now is the Equestria Girls tag.

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