Sunset Shimmer always like to be with friends but now she is alone.
So he try to find a boyfriend but no one likes here in the Canterlot High.
Here our story begin.
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You aren't supposed to delete comments! Then people will know you're easily ticked off and post even more comments. Trust me, you don't want to get on their bad side.
Title:
Correction: Sunset Shimmer's Story
Description:
Not to be rude or anything, but it sounds like a second grader wrote this description. Are you sure you're old enough to be on this site?
Chapters:
Too short, chapters should always be 1,000 words or more to be considered a good story. By this I mean the chapter has to be longer than 63 words.
From what've read so far, I believe you sound too young to be on this site and I'm disappointed. Maybe I'll come back to review the other chapters. Remember don't delete comments! People will believe you cannot accept constructive criticism, and it'll end up in a flame war and you'll be banned. Just a warning. ~ Silver Spoon
5708026 How is this an awesome story?
5708769 Because its funny!
5708776 But it's 956 words long. It seems like she only wrote one joke.
5708776
If you look at the tags, there is no "Comedy"
5708783 It's bug.
5708800 Oh!
Comedy tag should be added, if you intended on this story to have a joke or two in it.
Oh shit, you've had a rodeo before Bloody Ways. And I was HERE for it. Damn, wish I remembered what I said before you nuked the comments.
Wonder how much of THIS one you wrote yourself now.
I swear to God, if this has stolen content in it....
5960300 Start Googling excerpts.
5708755
I'm going to make a parody of this story. It will be sharp, humourous, and each chapter will be under 1,000 words long!
6015357 No,no! Comedies and very well written stories can have under 1,000 words. But stories like this, no. Because one of the chapters had only 63 words in it!
6016995 The reason my parody is set to have really short chapters (as does the original) is so it can be faithful to the original story while maintaining the fact that it's a parody of said story.
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