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Faded pictures bleached by sun, the tale's told, the summer's done. In memories, the pines still play, on a sunny summer's day.


It's time for the 10th annual Friendship Games, and the Wondercolts are determined to beat Crystal Prep to end their losing streak.

Until they realize that Crystal Prep has a new student, one who might change things up a little. And that she is starting to get on to the six magical girls that go to Canterlot High.

Which school will win and earn the title of Friendship Games Champion?

Made entirely before the trailer came out.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 109 )

Cool! :pinkiehappy:
I wrote a blog post explaining how I think things will pan out. :pinkiehappy: Wonder how close our interpretations will be to each other/actual movie canon. Sorry if it seems like self advertising, I suppose it is, but I just want to share! :P

Cool! I've actually read your story and that's what inspired me to make my own version :twilightblush:

5686908 That's awesome! :rainbowlaugh: I take it your will be a more serious interpretation? :derpytongue2:

Yeah, probably. I'm trying to keep it near the show / movie style.

U mean her mom called:twilightsmile:
its on the part when velvet called. Twi to eat breakfast.

Thanks, I'll be sure to clarify that

Awesome start! I can't wait to see more of this :)

Glad you like it! :twilightsmile:

Now I should really go to sleep, its almost 1am... :twilightoops:

Are Human Twilight and Human Sunset arch-enemies? 'Cause that would be an interesting twist if Twilight were to go ballistic and cost her school the Friendship Games (can't type that with a straight face) just to destroy what she thinks is her foe.

I like this one! Keep up the good work.


I'm planning for Human Twi (and others) to have a few confusions, so wait and see

Glad you like it :pinkiehappy:

This is pretty neat. But when Twilight goes on about how she wished spike could talk- that felt somewhat interjected, but I could see that little tid-bit happening in the third movie. Other than that it's a pretty good start I'd say. Have another like :trollestia:

Thanks for pointing that out. I honestly did kind of force that in there :twilightblush: but I'll remember for any other times

Yay! :yay: Chapter 1 (technically 2) should be coming out soon so keep watching

Awesome! Can't wait till they see Twilight

I was at a basketball game and I suddenly wondered if we'd see a cheerleading team in EQG 3. :pinkiehappy:

Decently interesting start from this side of things, but one quick note on grammar that is absolutely necessary to solve immediately.

In English prose, dialogue must always end with punctuation. If at the end of a sentence, the dialogue should have a period within the quotation marks. If in the middle of a sentence, providing there is no need to add an exclamation or question mark, dialogue should have a comma within the quotation marks to end the thought.
For example

Trying to stop an awkward moment, Fluttershy stepped in and changed the subject back. "Well, I think as long as Principal Celestia has an assembly, then we must know that it's important"

should be

Trying to stop an awkward moment, Fluttershy stepped in and changed the subject back. "Well, I think as long as Principal Celestia has an assembly, then we must know that it's important."


"Hey girls" Sunset said as she approached the group.

should be

"Hey girls," Sunset said as she approached the group.

I noticed that you never used a comma, though about half the time you did use a period in dialogue correctly. There were also a couple of times you dropped periods from the end of normal sentences. Overall, you really need to look into getting a proofreader/editor, or if you already have one, fire him.

Thanks for the tip, I'll fix that as soon as I have time today.

AWESOME Chapter!!!

YAY!!!:yay: season 5 is going to be AWESOME!!!

WHAT?! How did I miss the Season 5 annoucement?

Sorry for making you wait a while before another chapter :twilightoops:

I got a virus on my computer for like 3 days, so I had to send it in to get taken off.

But I promise I'll keep on the weekly updates from now on :twilightsheepish:

Wow! This one quite a bit different than the one I'm writing. But we do share our similarities, like how both of our interpretations of Crystal Prep had Sombra as the previous principal... except your chapters are betterly written and longer and more detailed and-
Looking forward to more! :raritywink:

Oh hey, now you're here! I've enjoyed your story too. :raritywink:


My mom showed me that dress trick picture!

WOAH, What a weird thing....Hmm.

Nice Chapter. keep up the AWESOME work!

I'm Sunny Flare" The girl said

You forgot a comma or exclamation. :twilightsmile: And "The" shouldn't be capitalized.

True that, Lemon and Twilight! I imagine Lemon is the Fashionista of the group, like Rarity is. :raritywink:


Not the dress thing! I thought that was over!

BLUE AND BLACK! It appears I have given Twilight Sparkle too much credit in terms of intellect

Good chapter! However, I didn't really care for the ending. Pretty sure the whole dress thing is going to date this story pretty quickly.
Other and than that and a few grammar mistakes, this is a very solid chapter!


Keep up the good work!:raritywink:

Yay! And since you're the first comment on this chapter, I will also give you a digital cookie too!

Pinkie sure knows how to motivate people

You're actin' as crazy as a loon," Applejack said,

:rainbowlaugh: Loons, oh, that's a good one!

Well, there's the obvious Rocky reference, and... I got nothing. :applejackunsure:

This is where things get interesting... :pinkiecrazy:

I love this chapter. Sunset's reaction at the end though and every body else's too.

If you like this one, the next one will have even more shenanigans :pinkiecrazy:

I'm pretty sure nobody else got the reference either, so don't worry! And dang it, I can't find a video of the clip that I referenced :fluttershysad:

5824033 i imagine this animated like the movie. Its to close to the mlp storie like...way :facehoof:

Maybe it's so close to MLP because I'm actually a secret writer from MLP :trollestia:

For some reason I swore that you had already read this... but apparently not, and I'm just going crazy :pinkiecrazy:
Glad you like it!

Twilight, it's BLACK AND BLUE :pinkiecrazy:

Also, LEMON ZEST :pinkiecrazy:

This is getting VERY interesting!!! Can't wait for more!!!:raritywink::raritystarry::heart:

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