Banshee

It was a peaceful stroll for Twilight Sparkle until she's ambushed by a changeling drone, but instead of attacking, the changeling is trying to convince her that he's really a human and wants to return. To make things harder, the changenling doesn't speak well Equestrian(or English) because of his nationality and Twilight thinks this could be a trap.

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Comment posted by mr_minati deleted Mar 4th, 2015

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mr_minati #2 · Mar 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks so much for the feedback, I obviously need help when writting, specially in English, but I'll take some notes on your advice.

Now, I think the cover art is good--it's the main character riding the Banshee on two wheels before falling and waking in Equestria. Farruco is not a fictional character, he's a reggeaton singer and a fucking drone(sangano) from my town who likes to fuck around with his fourtrack and made a stupid gang called "Los menores". So I imagined him trapped in a show for little girls as a bad guy so he can suffer.

And now to tell you to go fuck yourself in Puerto Rican style... Cabron, me puedes mamar el bicho bien mamaaooo!! canto pendejo, marica que ve muñecos de nena!