• Published 7th May 2012
  • 4,326 Views, 14 Comments

Canterlot Market - BradMayFan



After a day at the market Rarity and Fluer meet up with Fancy Pants for some nighttime fun.

  • ...
10
 14
 4,326
This story has been marked as having adult content. Please click below to confirm you are of legal age to view adult material in your country.

Confirm
Comments ( 14 )

I never thought I would actually like a story like this...but I liked it. Especially the ending. This put a lot of emotion into Fleur and Fancy I never would have imagined them having. That was a great story, thank you for making it. :scootangel: :facehoof:What is wrong with me?

556830 You gotta be bucking kidding me...

556846 Couldn't resist. I am actually reading through it now

556830

Is that really what first post feels like?

557320

Yes, yes it is.

Hah this was pretty good, a step up from most short clops. This had enough in it to be made much longer, its a shame you didn't. :duck:

Well, well, that sure was something.

It was too short, though. :duck:

This was very good. It remained in character for Rarity's perspective.
A few errors but nothing that detracted

*Makes creepy Pewdiepie slurpy sound while reading* :rainbowwild:

Login or register to comment