• Member Since 28th Nov, 2014
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Vinyl-ScratchDJ17


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Hello I'm John Mathews I'm an average day teenager. One day I turn into my fan-made character called Theseous. I have to live life as a pony.

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All right,

Good start, just want to make sure you know, every word I say it's like the story is being blunt.

Like 'Oh hey. this happened to me by the way.' and the character shrugs it off and the whols story does as well.

It's a pretty good start but it needs some work :/

So skull king...I see you decided to copy the whole news part from my cloudchaser and flitter story, to this one eh? XD :rainbowlaugh:

I wonder what will happen

,,,,,,,,,,,,, What is this I don't even.

"Oh hi sweetie!"

"I'm a pony mom!"

"All right. That's fine! Still love you though"

Really don't understand what makes sense about these predicaments -_-

5576849 yeah just wanted to get that part over with I couldn't think of anything to make him try and convince here so just went all YOLO

5579203 But...That's not how things work. O_0

I am Just testing this from my pc!i1381.photobucket.com/albums/ah219/Uberfox21/Angry_zps4zqc9f9w.jpg Idk but I am Just testing this if just works ok?

Sorry to say, but this gave me a migraine just trying to understand it

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