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Honeypelt945


I'm a Christian writer who loves to read and watch MLP

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Ever wonder who Blue Blood`s mother was?

Born during a time of war, Nadine, Celestia and Luna`s younger sister, was pony-napped by the Changelings. The Changelings corrupted and abused Nadine, turning what was supposed to be a beacon for hope, into a sinister psycho hungry for revenge.

Now, the Main 6 has to stop her before Equestria falls into her unforgiving hooves.....

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 30 )

i love this story!:twilightsmile:

5597287 Thank you, I`m glad you like it! :pinkiesmile:

5603854 when are you planing on geting another chapter out

5604656 I'm going to try to get another chapter out today, but I'll probably publish it tomorrow.

may i say again, that i really like this story:pinkiehappy:

5632155 I'm really glad you like it, new chapters are coming soon! :raritywink:

to anwer the note ubove i think it's a great plan:twilightsmile:
and talk about a intense chapter...I LOVED IT:pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the feedback, I have a good feeling about how this story is developing! :heart:

I have a feeling that Nadline has something to do with Starlight and Sorea. But I don't quite know yet.

5752819 According to the unofficial author guidelines I go by, I cannot tell you if you`re wrong or right, but I can say one thing: You will just have to keep reading to find out! :moustache:

5761545 Lol, I love to keep people in suspense! :pinkiesmile:

5880165 Or you could say the final showdown? :yay:

Comment posted by Honeypelt945 deleted Apr 23rd, 2015

Hm... the ending seemed a bit ambiguous yet rewarding, but I think that was on purpose. Also, from this point:

Aha! Suddenly, an idea popped up in her head.

onwards the story is in italics. I don't know if this was an oversight or if it was done on purpose, but I'm just bringing this to your attention in case you did not know(I've done it before as well :twilightblush:). But, you have my applause ma'am :eeyup:

6018391 I'm so glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy: The whole story being in italic was NOT intentional, and I don't how it happened. If you know how to fix it, please tell me.

Yeah, I'm going to write an Epilouge, so keep your eye out for that! :raritywink:

6033607 What you need to go is edit the chapter, hit Ctrl and F at the same time(at least that's how it is on Windows), search the phrase that I used as an example, Write "" In front of "Suddenly" and I think it should work. Also, if that doesn't work, I would suggest that you read through the chapter in edit mode so you'll be able to see the italics in their command form, so you'll see where you may have forgotten to end an italic.

I certainly will :raritywink:

6033702 Okay, thanks! (Am I the only one who's noticed all the weird dating ads?) :rainbowhuh:

6033774 I noticed them as well. I saw one about a furry site
My Reaction: :rainbowderp::derpyderp1::unsuresweetie::facehoof:

6033815 Lol, I'm sorry you had to see that! :rainbowlaugh:

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