• Member Since 28th Nov, 2014
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Vinyl-ScratchDJ17


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Vinyl and Rainbow dash go back in time and have to survive 7 nights at the place to go back home. Will They Make it or will they die?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 66 )

5538623 Well way to be rude. this is one of my friend's first stories okay? He's just starting out so show some respect. -Vinyl (account owner)

Comment posted by re- Yamsmos deleted Jan 24th, 2015

5538653 he has an account he just shares mine with me. And you cant expect beginners to be able to make perfect stories

Comment posted by re- Yamsmos deleted Jan 24th, 2015

5538683 try reading one of my stories then. herobrines return is his other one, but the rest are mine. they're decent i would say, and half of them made it into the what's hot list

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So, you're saying something along the lines of that, except more of "plz liek mi storee, nu h8" or whatever. Sir, may I suggest you try reading one of my stories? I may still be a novice and may sound a bit like an attention whore, but even I can show ya a few things about writing.

5538710 Not saying they have to like the story. just not to hate on the guy cause hes new to this whole writting thing, and I know how to write at least decent stories kay?

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just not to hate on the guy cause hes new to this whole writting thing

Who do you speak of? I'm intrigued...

5538725 im sharing my account with a friend of mine. lol i spelled writing with 2 t's lol

5538731 Then tell him/her to check some of my works. Preferably the more recent ones.

5538753 And make sure ya have the mature box checked in, just as a precaution.

5538756 I don't use that. just incase im not of legal age even though in going to be 17 in june. but it's just a precaution lol XD

Comment posted by The Guardian and Friends deleted Jan 24th, 2015

The pacing is a bit fast on this. I see potential in this... But only if you make your paragraphs longer and slow them down. Describe some things y'know? Make use of the theories that have been swarming around.

Actually its mangle just wanted to say.

5541311 This is my friends story, and so is the herobrine one. The others are mine though. YEs im sharing my account with another person

5538738 Hi Dragonborne Fox!! Also if Vinyl-and-Skull-King is reading this like I said before extend it! But over all still it has a good plot I mean so far all your storys that I have read have a good plot but there just to fast just slow them down and they will http://rs1img.memecdn.com/fabulous_o_324390.jpg

5541347 Oh, so you're the same guy who wrote this? Okay, I can accept that.

5541361 What? I think your saying I wrote this but I think my brain just stopped for a moment so I cant tell but I didn't write it if that's what your saying.

5541376 the authors name would be in a purple box, unlike everyon elses which are in green boxes

5541458 I know; I thought bobdude did before he said otherwise.

Hey guys and gals I'm going to add more to this story. Cus I am feeling a little bit better i will do this for you guys And gals.

-SkullKing

5541311 okay thanks I kinda got mixed up with mangled and mangle :D

Also guys I'm thinking of writing a lord of the rings story but first I have to finish watching them. Which I should this weekend. One down two more to go I'm watching the extended version. Man they are long. The first one is almost four hours long so you I'm sick.

-SkullKing

5544954 That must have been my friend, I dont delete my comments because i know i can change them

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