Return Of the Past: First Day In The Past
They exit the building. They walk around. Everything looked almost the same. It was still dark. Celestia's Sun was coming out.
"Did we go back in time!?!" Said Vinyl.
"We are in Ponyville but it looks different."
They see a stallion and a mare walking by. They decide to go talk to them and ask them what year is it.
"Hello mam, what year is it?" Said Vinyl.
"It's 1987. Why do you ask?" Said the mare.
The mare has an orange colored mane and tail. She has blue fur.
"Just wondering." Said Rainbow.
The mare and the stallion walk away. They decide to go get something to eat. When they got to this restaurant Celestia's sun was clear in the bright blue sky. They sat in the hay chairs and ordered hay fries.
"How do you think we will get back to our time?" Asked Rainbow dash.
"Well let's keep on surviving the other six nights at the Pizzaria and maybe we will find out how to get back to our time." Vinyl replied.
They get their hay fries and eat them.
The next night is coming soon.
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5538623 Well way to be rude. this is one of my friend's first stories okay? He's just starting out so show some respect. -Vinyl (account owner)
5538653 he has an account he just shares mine with me. And you cant expect beginners to be able to make perfect stories
5538662 what?
5538683 try reading one of my stories then. herobrines return is his other one, but the rest are mine. they're decent i would say, and half of them made it into the what's hot list
5538685 did it suck?
5538695 img0.derpicdn.net/img/2014/9/22/727234/large.png
So, you're saying something along the lines of that, except more of "plz liek mi storee, nu h8" or whatever. Sir, may I suggest you try reading one of my stories? I may still be a novice and may sound a bit like an attention whore, but even I can show ya a few things about writing.
5538683 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/238827/princess-luna-is-in-your-bed this was my most popular story
5538710 Not saying they have to like the story. just not to hate on the guy cause hes new to this whole writting thing, and I know how to write at least decent stories kay?
5538719
Who do you speak of? I'm intrigued...
5538725 im sharing my account with a friend of mine. lol i spelled writing with 2 t's lol
5538731 Then tell him/her to check some of my works. Preferably the more recent ones.
5538749 kay
5538738 will do
5538753 And make sure ya have the mature box checked in, just as a precaution.
5538756 I don't use that. just incase im not of legal age even though in going to be 17 in june. but it's just a precaution lol XD
5538782 Indeed.
5538820
5538824 We cool?
5538833 ya
5538838 ^^
5538840 just kidding
5538861 D:
5538888 lol
5538899 X3
lol>>5538912
5538919 :D
5538711 I can see why it was popular. Luna4evu :3
5541311 This is my friends story, and so is the herobrine one. The others are mine though. YEs im sharing my account with another person
5538738 Hi Dragonborne Fox!! Also if Vinyl-and-Skull-King is reading this like I said before extend it! But over all still it has a good plot I mean so far all your storys that I have read have a good plot but there just to fast just slow them down and they will http://rs1img.memecdn.com/fabulous_o_324390.jpg
5541347 Oh, so you're the same guy who wrote this? Okay, I can accept that.
5541361 What? I think your saying I wrote this but I think my brain just stopped for a moment so I cant tell but I didn't write it if that's what your saying.
5541373 Ah. Oki.
5541361 oh i didnt write this my friend did.
5541376 the authors name would be in a purple box, unlike everyon elses which are in green boxes
5541458 I know; I thought bobdude did before he said otherwise.
5541464 kkk
5541543 :D
5541551 I need to pee XD
Now im farting 
5541553 damn
Hey guys and gals I'm going to add more to this story. Cus I am feeling a little bit better i will do this for you guys And gals.
-SkullKing
5541311 okay thanks I kinda got mixed up with mangled and mangle :D
Also guys I'm thinking of writing a lord of the rings story but first I have to finish watching them. Which I should this weekend. One down two more to go I'm watching the extended version. Man they are long. The first one is almost four hours long so you I'm sick.
-SkullKing
5544945 i guess
5544954 That must have been my friend, I dont delete my comments because i know i can change them
5545041 aahh okay
5544945 okay btw I just deleted the hate comments
5545241 okay thanks for advice okay :D