They always say to love your neighbor as well as your enemy. In some cases, the person in question could be both.
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Did you ... did you really ...
You know what ? Why the hell not ! let's see where this goes
"Also... I didn't find anything really big to fix, so I just corrected a few punctuation errors."
You might want to remove that.
... Trixie planned this, didn't she? Also, Chrysalis disguise was Lyra?
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Next chapter: the manticore moves into Trixie's room, because they still need a roommate and it owes them.
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Shit... I didn't even realize that. Although, I don't think I'd categorize Lyra's hair as "curly". Still, I might want to tweak that disguise a bit.
I don't believe you. You're trying to psych me out Sketchy, but it won't work!
Trixie: Trixie's arm! Her Ping- Pong career is ruined!
I think I'd know if Trixie was in pain
Trixie: Trixie is in so much pain!
But seriously, you almost had me there.
I'm still betting its all part of the act.
We, the ending was intense.
Love that Chrissy went as Lyra, and I seriously doubt that Trixie has bought the farm.
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Nut sure if I'd call Lyra's mane "curly".
But yeah, I can see the similarity. Totally accidental, I swear.
Your super cereal!?
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Well...crap.
I have an idea of what's going on, but if she's actually dead... I suggest when killing someone off that you get both viewpoints or just the viewpoint of the die-ee. Makes things more dramatic, tense, and emotional.
so what does that mean she's going to need someone to take care of her until she's better, well i guess that's where the favors come into play
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stayclassy
5632114 You... you killed Trixie... I... don't know how I should feel about this. One question though... why.
Chrysalis and Adrian: So much for those favours then.
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I dunno.
5632304 You cheecky little dick waffle. This is planned. You spoiled it. Yeap. I am sure of it now.
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Alright. You keep thinking that.
5632310 Trixie sounds like a Poker player that's addicted in Poker. Bigger bets each time to cut down on the loses. Still... I feel bad for this. I really wish it was a bluff. We're gonna learn next chapter I think.
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Go to the show, they said. It'll be fun, they said.
I honestly didn't expected that.
... Ok, looking forward to seeing ho this turn out. And I don't see a gore or dark tag here, so...
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Blood counts as gore?
5632389 well, no, I don't think so. However, you are talking about someone being mauled by a lion sized creature. If you show the aftermath or the action in graphic detail, then it's gore.
But I was saying I doubt she's dead because I don't see a gore tag.
You should color code the favors, like a light color for small favors (loaning a few bucks, etc.) and darker shades for more serious favors (i.e black for 'I need an organ transplant and you just so happen to be a perfect match). That way, certain favors can be/can't be denied.
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Yeah, well I don't plan on showing how she looks. Since I've already put it out there that she's dead, there really isn't any reason to go into any more detail about it. Less is more sometimes.
As Adrian woke up from his deep slumber he frowned at the sight and sound of Trixie bowing infront of the applauding audience.
"Welp, so much for that." He said with a sigh.
"So much for what?" Chrysalis said.
"I just had a delightful dream about Trixie getting killed by a manticore."
"To bad it was just a dream."
Show of hands, who thinks Trixie's dead?
*crickets chirp*
Yeah...
Love this show!
She's not dead its an emotional trap. You guys owe me money if I get this right. The blood is fake its apart of the show!
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cos apparently if you do you get killed off.
This is obviously a trick, it has to be............
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Or not.
Satan: hello, welcome to hell.
Trixie: why is The great and powerful Trixie here?! She shouldn't be dead! And she hasn't sinned!
Satan looks at her bemused.
Trixie keeps glaring at him.
Her hat that was adorned in stars, now shredded to near pieces.
Satan snaps his fingers and a imps scurries over, carrying a clipboard. Satan picks up the clipboard and thanks the imp. The imp nods and scurries back into a fire.
Satan: 'You died by a manticore during a magic show?' How do you even get a manticore with your crappy funds? I mean, your paycheck is okay, but honestly speaking, you kinda sucked. Many magicians came here before you, and many more will come. Anyway, walk into the fire on your right.
Trixie: ... no.
Trixie proceeds to pout.
Satan is unaffected.
Satan: Listen girly, I'm being real nice to you, now do as I say, or you will get kicked into the fire on your left.
Trixe: But I wasn't ready to die. I was just getting to a nice point of my life. Sure, that fire was a small setback, but within a month I could have a nice apartment.
Satan smiles softly, creeping Trixie out.
Satan: Well, that's fine and dandy, but you're dead. There is no way to go back to your life. So, again, walk into the flame on your right, or get kicked into the flame on your left.
Trixie dejectedly walks to her right. And a boot smacks her right in the face.
Satan: Congratulations, you just got a boot to the head.
Will we ever find out if Trixie is dead?
How will Adrian & Rusty feel with Chrysalis alone with them?
And who will be eliminated next in Equestria's Next Top Model?
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Find out on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball Z!
Um...okay? I guess that just happened. Um...yeah.
Fingers crossed that you actually have killed off trixie and aren't just pulling my leg.
Yeah, sure you did. (grins and rolls eyes)
Eh...
Heck of a dream
Well, that just happened. If that was reality then it'll set Trixie back...
*puts on sunglasses*
... A lifetime.
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH I'll shut up now
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*** Ghost Trixie arrives on stage to thunderous applause***
"That was the greatest magic trick I've ever seen," say Adrian and Chrysalis overwhelmed.
"I know," says Ghost Trixie, "but I can only do it once."
Dead huh....? Well that is a new direction, I expected her to still be alive. Maimed to high hell but still breathing.
Well... Shit.
Not buyin' it.
Getting mauled to death seems a little dark for her type of performances.
I mean, there are small children in the audience right?
And she did say that she needs to sell as many tickets as she can, right?
Good luck with that if people are too scared to come back.
Not that there's anything wrong with traumatizing people, I do it all the time.
Plus this doesn't seem like the type of story where someone would get the axe.
But then again I'm not the author and I've been wrong before.
While I do think the trick's quite impressive, I'm afraid there might have been the backlash of mentally scarring all of the kids/foals in the audience... Yep, that's Trixie for ya.
Also, I know the three hate each other, but was Adrian and Chrysalis laughing at Trixie's request really necessary? It's kind of harsh.