They always say to love your neighbor as well as your enemy. In some cases, the person in question could be both.
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OK, I so didn't see that ending coming. I'm surprised that Trixie and Adrian, especially Trixie, were willing to help Chrysalis out like that. Still, I loved the way they fooled the owner of the building and I also hope to see the next chapter soon, so that the awkwardness will begin. This is one of your best chapters with twist endings.
There are words that describe my feeling for this turn of events, but I cannot call them forth. I don't think it was a bad turn, just a turn I wasn't expecting yet.
...Well Balls, didn't see that coming...
At all.
I hope it works out for her.
What's a bit of awkward, lifesaving sex amongst frien.... er.... roomies, eh?
Very surprising twist. I do hope it won't automatically cause a relationship though. Not that one starting is bad, but I don't want this to be the root cause of it.
Not how I thought it would happen, but hey, weirder shit has happened.
That kinda sucks.
i liked this chapter but holy shit i didn't see that coming, i'm curious where this is going
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Staying true to the tag.
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Oliver twist, you done got me again.
Killjoy.
I would point out that I totally fucking called it but that seems kind of a dick move so I won't. What I WILL do, however, is cry like a little bitch while I wait for the conclusion to this particular odyssey. Well done once again, good sir.
Umm... is that even legal in Uno? I mean, I know it's been a while since I played, but I was under the impression that you could only play one card per turn.
Here's how:
5759307 Oh my gawd. Yes......Yes. That's exactly what will happen
. You sir are a genius haha. Yeah, Comedy.
I love this story so far and this universe. Keep it up, you have my full support that doesn't require me spending money
You've come a long way in your writing. I look forward to starting this!
I don't see Chryssy getting too much energy from a such an akward night season.
If there is no sex or gore in a story then it doesn't need to be classified as a mature story. I have seen worse themes in a teen rated story before, so when I look at this story and see the mature tag I get confused because it really isn't that mature. It has heavily implied scenes yes, but if that is not the focus or a highlight of the story then this story should just be teen rated. It would also allow people with the mature filter on to see and read your story.
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NAUGHTY RANKO COME QUICK!!
5759127 agreed, i wanted to read how there awkward threesome went
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There's a house rule that lets you drop more than one card of the same number.
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Well, according to the FAQ, if the content of a story would warrant an "Adult Supervision" recommendation on a TV broadcast, then it can be rated Mature. The humor in this story is more crude and harsh than my other comedies, so I felt that it warranted a Mature rating.
Does it limit my audience, yeah, but considering that the popularity of this story has surpassed that of the last story I completed (which was rated Teen and more available to readers) in less than six months and ten chapters when that story had twenty and has been on his site for almost a year, I don't think it's that detrimental of a decision.
Dang...
Tomorrow morning is going to be awkward to say the least. Especially if Rusty starts getting suspicious.
How deliciously awkward. Gentlemen, we are going to have one helluva spaghetti dinner tonight!
Hmmmmm...I wonder if Adrian will do the deed with Trixie too....they're going to be naked in the same room after all and in the heat of the moment people tend to do things without thinking.
I just got dejavu...have I posted something similar in one of your other stories?
I just thought of something.
Since Adrian's only real issue was all the noise that it was making before, couldn't he just make a rule that says that Chrysalis is allowed to bring someone over for a "session" ONLY if Trixie is around to cast the sound proofing spell?
That way, none of them would be put in such an awkward position in the future.
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There was still the issue of having strange dudes and/or chicks in his house.
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Ah, didn't think of that.
I had a huge laugh at that. Rusty is by far my favorite... despite having the same name as my brother-in-law... On a brighter note, I like this side of Chrysalis. I like her.
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I don't think so.
i can just imagine Adrian walking out of Chrysalis room while Rusty is waiting for him on the couch.
Well then, that escelated quickly. One day they hate their guts and the next they're fucking each other silly.
Keep it up Sketchy!
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Of course. House rules. I should've known...
Wow, I imagine not much else would come out of this, but damn. I'd offer to do the clop scene in a separate story, but I don't think I could do it with these circumstances.
Let the awkwardness commence!
So, why is this story labeled Mature instead of Teen? Teen is for things that talk about mature things without showing them, or going into detail.
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According to the FAQ, if the content of a story would warrant an "Adult Supervision" recommendation on a TV broadcast, then it can be rated Mature. The humor in this story is more crude and harsh than my other comedies, so I felt that it warranted a Mature rating in order to let people familiar be aware of what I'm doing.
A story doesn't really need a Sex or Gore tag to be Mature, and I made it clear from the tags and the long description that this story wasn't gonna have clop in it, so I'm not sure why people are asking questions this late in the game.
5763917 I wasn't expecting clop. I was just curious about why it was mature instead of teen. Know I know.
Um, any chance just cuddling would work, Chrysalis?
I kind of have this abstinence/celibacy thing going on right now.
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You can't absorb lust from cuddling, silly!
I was not expecting that at all! After reading the chapter I was just like...
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My exact reaction.
5770201 Come on, I'm sure cuddling a Changeling is the equivalent of giving them a protein bar at least.
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True, but considering the state that Chrysalis is in, she needs way more than a protein bar.
5770448 Oh, well, Adrian and Trixie...