They always say to love your neighbor as well as your enemy. In some cases, the person in question could be both.
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Don't forget Mr. Saddleton. They've already had common ground with him.
The banging WILL happen. That's probably why I felt a tremor in the Force.
Huh, things are slowly turning better.
Had quite a few, a surprising number, of mixed up words in here. Looks like autocorrect issues, if you use it. I think it could bear to go through another round of proofreading.
I think it's going to go splendidly for Chrysalis. As long as she doesn't over do things.
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Dammit. Care to point out some of the errors?
I do enjoy how this relationship is developing. It's harder to hate someone when the they're not just "that annoying bitch that lives next door." Though they may not get to like each other, they will begin to understand each other.
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Think you might have the wrong speaker here, can't tell.
Not sure how that happened, but I'm pretty sure it's comedian.
I'm fairly certain there was another, major one somewhere. Some word that was completely out of place at the end of a sentence somewhere, like whatever was supposed to be there was replaced by some word that rhymed with it somehow. But I can't find it on my second reading, so maybe I just misread something. If it's really there, I'm sure someone else will point it out.
That's just what some people need sometimes, not a pity hug and comforting words but a boot in the ass to get them off it and moving again.
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Yeah. Roxy calls Cel a bitch every other day. She can be a real... bitch... sometimes.
And comedienne is the term for a female comedian. Don't know why the word has to exist, but I used it.
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Ah, alright.
And huh. Never heard that before. Alright then.
awesome
stayclassy
Great chapter, as usual.
Apparently Chrysalis thinks that she isn't "pretty" unless she pulls a transformation.
That's a little sad.
5739054 Give it time.
Adrian channeling his inner Redimg2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120824033013/dickfigures/images/c/cb/Red_(Deep_Space_promo)_2.png
5739373 I know, right? I actually prefer Chryssie without a disguise.
5739508 5739373 Can you really blame her, though? Without the disguises, the locals might see Changelings as some kind of monsters, and who knows how much to the degree until that invasion? Now not only does Equestria see Changelings as ugly monsters, but evil as well. Quite frankly, I'm honestly surprised Trixie didn't even figured that out when Chrysalis mentioned that. Though it might be a bit of a good thing that she might thought of the ex-queen as pretty in her original form, she doesn't know that almost every other pony only sees her as one when she's in disguise, and it's her only method for her to get those ponies to bed.
And Adrian, I know how much it bothers the fuck out of him to hear her sex sounds overnight, but she isn't just doing it for fun and games. It was clear he didn't know that when Chrysalis mentioned using magic to form disguises, and she can only get that kind of magic from, well, fucking. I actually hope he and Trixie will understand this at some point in the story. Communication and understanding can go a long way for many relationships, even enemies.
Anyway, awesome chapter. I believe you'll be posting MOA:AP next since this is the second update of HTN, right? I'll be looking forward to both.
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When should be replaced with an than, unless my English betrays me.
Being stuck together the way they are and with Equestria basically running on the magic of friendship and all anyway, I'd have been rather surprised (probably let down as well, come to think of it) if those four hadn't started to warm up to each other just a bit eventually. And it's all the better because none of the character development feels even the slightest bit forced.
I still foresee lots of hilarity in the future, of course.
Relationship upgrade: Mild loathing reached
Next Level: Tranquil Hatred
Nice chapter, but there's a couple of things you may want to edit.
This may be nit-pick, but I think a "to" should be between those two words.
And you previously wrote that there were five clients, not four.
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Thanks.
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Keep telling yourself that.
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Thank God. I was hoping that I wasn't going too fast since it's only been nine chapters.
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I usually update MOA:AP during the last week of the month, so I think I can squeeze in one HTN chapter before I work on that.
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Well, "comédienne" is actually the french female for "comédien", which itself was translated in english as "comedian". But I didn't know one could use it in english though. Guess we all learned something here.
Am I the only one that thinks it will end with AdrianXChrysalis?
5739021 yeah they do, but still, more common ground is better for safe landings.
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Agreed. And along the line, Trixie gets jeally, tries to steal Adrian from Chrissy, and shenanigans ensue, only for the problem to be solved with the use of the all-equestrian standby; herding.
5740940 so far any way
might want to reword this a bit, maybe "I worked my ass off last night" and it might sound better.
Sorry if this is seeming like I'm being a nit picking asshat but I do this for most stories that I come across but I will stop if you want me to.
Mmmm... you say no clop, I'm not expecting a clop scene... but I'm sure something will be implied~
Nicely done man!