They always say to love your neighbor as well as your enemy. In some cases, the person in question could be both.
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I can already see the chapter coming when they all figure out their mistakes and apologize and finally act like friends.
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I really hope it doesn't come too soon, the banter they have is one of the best parts.
I've not started reading yet, but I already have to applaud the sheer craziness required to come up with an idea as silly as this and apparently getting quite popular results, too. That'll be interesting.
Not gonna read this quite yet, but this has 'stereotypical sitcom' written all over it, albeit with interdimensional travellers
It's pretty much the same as every chapter. Not that it's a bad thing. It's basically we go through each of their varying POVs, they bicker with each other, then we learn a little more about them and their struggles. It does seem repeated but I realize that is just the way you're doing the plot development so like I said it's not really hurting your story as long as the repetition advances the story
Look! Another ENTM Fan! You can bond over your shared disdain of Hoity Toity!
Is Larry from the game Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney?
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I don't plan on having it be this way for much longer, now that each main character has an established goal (Adrian wants his series to be made, Trixie wants to make enough money to move out, and Chrysalis wants to get over her past and live her life peacefully) as well as a common enemy, (their landlord), I'm now going to focus on having them interact with each other beyond just their usual bickering.
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Nah, I never played any of the Phoenix Wright games. I don't normally include characters from other franchises in my fics, so if there's ever a character that seems to be from another fictional work, it's most likely a coincidence.
Wait, if Sunflower didn't know that Trixie was Larry's latest stalking victim, why did she tell Trixie to hide? Wouldn't it have made more sense for herself to duck and cover?
So now we got two common enemies, the landlord and Hoity Toity. Not sure where you're going with the Equestria's Next Top Model stuff. Hopefully it'll be more than just 'here's the one thing we can bond over.'
Overall a decent chapter, if a little lacking in dramatic tension, since our three protagonists hardly interacted with each other. But it looks like that's about to change, huh? Also, yay for Babs cameo. Called it.
I can sense a shocking scene in the next chapter.
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...Fuck. I'll have to tweak that conversation a little.
You'll see... (Maniacal cackle)
Actually, you caused it. Including Babs never crossed my mind until you brought it up, and then I felt silly for not thinking about it myself.
Love how the protagonists of this story love ENTM and hate Hoity Totty.
5547979 It's a Capcom game. Phoenix Wright:Ace Attorney is in the apple app store for free. The first episode has Larry in it, he is also very similar to the Larry in your story. You should give it a try if you have some free time.
WHAT? They had the audacity to boot Fleur? Those judges be high...
5547961 Or the show itself. If Trixie's in it too, we got ourselves a fan club.
5548167 I wouldn't say the Larry in PW is similar to the one here. I mean the former may be crazy into chicks, but not once have I heard that he's into the older ladies. Plus, he's clumsy to the point it gets him into murder cases while the only mishap I've seen in this story is the trip. Clumsy, but normal in any setting.
Hmm... What exactly will get the three to interact? The landlord may be one thing, but could they possibly help each other out with their own goals? Who knows. I look forward to see where it goes.
Should be a "him" there. Unless Roxy really did a number to Cel.
Can't Trixie just ... you know ... get a restraining order on Johnny or whatever that guys name is?
Dear Mr. Changeling
What a pleasant little treat to wake up to. Not bad over all just two little hiccups and I'll be on my way.
I do believe that's suppose to be your
him.
And a little something before I go, am I the only one feeling a small sense of pity for dear Larry boy? Yeah he's going about courting women all wrong but maybe he goes after older women to replace the love he never got from his mama? That's of course assuming that his childhood was bad enough for that kind of mentality to develop.I don't know, nor do I yet care enough to defend the little one.
Best of wishes.
Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.
5548328 My guess is ENTM. Or hatred of Hoity Toity.
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Ah, I see. But it's a good thing to include her, I think. Both Adrian and Chryssie have their friends. It's a nice to know that Trixie does have some genuine friends. Otherwise her only acqauintance would be Equestria's Next Serial Killer.
kek, connections between characters that nobody knows about. Keep it that way, it's beautiful.
Wait? Since when does Babs have a sister?
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Comics
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If you're referring to Babs and Trixie, they met and became friends in the Manhattan Mysteries arc of the comics.
Hello potential bonding topic
Entertaining.
5549154 Since I don't read the comics, that does clear that particular bit up (though this being the internet, I generally just roll with whatever gets thrown my way- it's easier like that.). What I was referring to was ENTM addiction both Chryssie and Adrian have. If that sort of stuff keeps happening between characters without them knowing, it would be hilarious when they found out, especially if they try to hide whatever it is.
This story has been a very entertaining read so far. I like the fact that each character feels unique both in attitude and lifestyle. This has definitely been a selling point to me.
yum filler. but seriously though i enjoyed this
stay classy
5549327 Wasn't the only one who notice.
I hate to say it but I see Adrian hooking up with Trixie or Chrysalis at some point. Maybe as a drunken mistake, maybe not, but I'm fairly sure it will happen. Then things are going to get weird.
I feel like her and Rusty will end up watching it together and become best friends :P
Nice job!