Why soooo short

Great chapter. I like how Trixie and Babs did a show together.

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This is the usual length of the chapters for this story. Most of the chapters are about 2500-4000 words in length, with the previous chapter and Chapter II being an exception.

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Ok... why so long to wai... uhm xD pretty same anserw gonna work for this too

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I spent the last month working on two one-shots, and once they were done, I started working on this.

Let the shipping commence!
Nicely done chapter, ser author!

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True, but the whole point of the competition is to groom mares with no experience so that the winner can get signed to an agency. Since Chrysalis already has professional experience and has already been referred to a top agency by a top model, all she has to do is head on over and audition.

Yeah, there's no guarantee that they'll sign her, but then again, there's also no guarantee that she'll make it past the casting process for the competition, let alone win it.

“I know it all too well,” I smiled, “I’d muss up your mane a little, but we don’t have time to fix it back.”

We both had a little laugh at that, and I looked down at Babs with a sense of pride. Even if magic didn’t end up being her special talent, I still felt happy that she was so enthusiastic to share in something that I was so passionate about.

These two lines are interesting seeing as what her Special talent really is.

My little assistant giggled as we walked out of the dressing room. “Just checkin’”

Missing period

I guess while I'm at this, I should put this here.

I grabbed the bubble with both hands and tossed it out to the audience, and they all stood up and bounced Babs around while the spell kept her in the bubble’s center.

Feels almost a little too much like a run on. This would probably flow better like this.

I grabbed the bubble with both hands and tossed it out to the audience. Like I expected, they all stood up and excitedly bounced Babs around while the spell kept her in the bubble’s center.

Trixie and Christie wouldn't know what to do with themselves if they all moved out of Adrians place.

I look forward to the competition.

As always, a good chapter.

This is SOOOOO good! Can't wait for more.

I smell a really good chekhov's gun

x10

this place must see about a thousand models a day, what chance do I have of-”

Well she could be a thousand models, so her chances are pretty good

They all need to move on. That is how careers work.

Could this strange new emotion Chrysalis won't name actually be... affection?

Aww, look, they really do love like tolerate want to strangle each other a little less!

Nice, good to see you back at it again! Any chance you do an audio book on your youtube?

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Probably not. I tend to keep my stories separate from YT, plus there's the fact that I have two female perspectives in this story, and if I were to do an audio reading, I'd prefer to have one voice for each perspective.

6088242 dude I was thanking that maybe in the future the changelings come back and beg chrysalis to come back

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He's light-skinned, and it was explained in chapter 2 that his parents are an interracial couple.

“Sorry, I just found it really funny when you were so surprised to see that my dad was black and my mom was white. It was like you never saw a mixed-race couple before.”

Very nice chapter. I love the gradual progression of their relationship.

Yeah, Chrysalis is pretty much any fashion designer's wet dream, pretty and exotic, but she can assume any body shape / colour imaginable.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Mmmm... so close to the end I am hating it! DX Darn it...

Nice job.

“Pretty much,” I nodded. “What if they don’t give me a chance because of… you know…”

Seeing as you are a shapeshifter, that sounds like more reason TO hire you because you can take on any appearance.