They always say to love your neighbor as well as your enemy. In some cases, the person in question could be both.
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First. Also, nice work, mate!
Hmm chrysalis couldn't ask her friend/boss to help her? I know its kinda strange to ask boss about this but it would be way less stressfull for her? I think you just should somehow say that he can't accomodate her or something to kick out that option.
anyway wow rusty you little fuck
Uhm, seems to me like rule number four has been doubled.
Now I'm curious as to what Chryssie is keeping in that box. My first guess: Her old crown. Or possibly a memento of the time she spent with Shining while disguised as Cadence, considering how she previously stated that this was the tastiest love she ever had.
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Thanks! Just fixed it.
Should've closed the door when he saw the two.
I wonder what you'll do with Chrysalis, where you'll go with her.
Rusty don't push it!
And thus the shenanigans begin!
It's fun to laugh at other's misfortune!
Y'know, I'd like to see a chapter where a starving and desperate Chrysalis tries to feed off Adrian or Trixie. I can imagine that going well.
Three chapters in and I think this is my favorite of your fics. Can't wait to see more Rusty
The interaction between those two is great.
that's pretty racist rusty
thing are getting interesting changeling
Missing a period after 'sayin'.
Purposefully missing word?
My comedy sense are tingling!
I love it!
Dear Mr. Sketch
Well well, quite the delightful surprise if I might say, and one to wake up too at that. Just a few little quips and I'll be on my way.
I do believe that was meant to be with, my good sir.
Nothing wrong here, just a little awkward since you said head twice. Try mind and see what you think.
A hiccup and a half, loosing our touch are we editor san? Oh ho ho ho, I'm just yankin your chain amigo. Much love for the quick update.
Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.
5393106 She has her crown doesnt she? Her little crown?
*Brings popcorn* Let the hell break lose.
And then the story got better.
In the canon, I like Trixie and Chrysalis on the same level. Here, I may be leaning more into the latter than the former in the likeness level. No, it's not because of her sexual acts and how you detailed her body last chapter (*coughs* maybe *coughs*), but I like how she's trying to overcome her struggles both internal and external: moving on from her ruling over her ungrateful subjects, having only one pony to feel happy and safe around when everyone else sees her as public enemy number one, and, what she does everyday in her life: disguise herself as someone else not just to get someone's love, but possibly receive some acceptance and respect when she couldn't with her true face. You just gotta feel some sympathy for those characters sometimes, you know?
Trixie on the other hand, though she's well on her way of reforming herself after her acts in Ponyville, not only is she struggling in show business, but she has eating habits that I'm not sure she's been carrying her whole life or it came recently. Not much to know about this character yet, same goes for Adrian.
I'm definitely looking forward to see how we'll see more of those three and their development as they live together. Keep up the good work.
What could possibly go wrong?
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Maybe... or it could be something else. (MWAHAHAHA!)
Time to start playing either the them from Three's Company or The Odd Couple.
Now they are in smaller space. Even with rules, roommates can suck balls.
5393949 LIKE A HUGE GIANT DILDO OF DEATH!!! Also why are you laughing maniacally? Oh wait... oh no... It's Celestia's OLD crown? HOLY SHIT THAT WOULD BE... STOP TEASING ME DAMMIT!
Really good work so far, i really enjoy reading your work.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Eh-hehehe...
I take full responsibility. It was a rush job at five o'clock this morning. And for some reason I had Franz Ferdinand stuck in my head.
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Dear Davidisim (a.k.a Editor san)
Don't sweat it comrade. I know what it's like being the soul editor of a fine frikin fic. You're doing a bang up job if these are the things getting by you.
Take care, have a very merry Christmas, and indeed stay classy.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
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Thank you. I shall indeed have a merry Christmas. Very merry at that.
5393896 EVERYTHING!
It's like Three's Company back in the day. Oi I'm old.
nope i was wrong, this is better then three's company
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stay classy
Chrysalis is actually my favorite character in this.
5396154 ditto, she feels like she has tha most depth
Bughorse, I like it!
Just keeps on getting better and better. Keep it coming!
This is one of the most interesting stories I´ve ever read on this side. Can´t wait to see how this will go on.
Is Chrysalis's "item" a crown from when she was Queen?
lol I'm mad at my self that I was actually surprised that Adrian's rules were normal.
Sketchy, you have acquired my interest in another one of your stories.
Keep it up
YOU, Dear writer has more than earned a fav with "50 SHADES OF NO!"
Oh come on, Adrian. I know Trixie's give a bit Jabba the Hutt , but you you have the smexiest, slick Carapace clad girl in your apartment that can change pretty much into anyone and anything.
Cya
Raziel-chan
THAT'S ALOTTA NO
Hahahah, is that enough no for ya bub?
Nice chapter man, I smelled this coming from a mile away, hehee.
Nice job!
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I actually like both of them but would definitely have to give Trixie more rules than Chrissy.