Gonna try this whole writing thing again.
For teenage Cheese Sandwich, traveling all over Equestria is a way of life. It became second nature for him to trust his Cheesie Sense to lead him the right direction. But when he is led to a retirement home in the middle of nowhere, he begins to question its accuracy. What good could he do there?
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Well done with the adaptions with the song especially. My heart broke a little once I heard the actual audio.
Nice job.
5259225 Thanks. I was actually joking with my sister that you can't listen to the song for the first time without choking up just a little. It had me tearing up in places when I was writing this.
I like it! Just like all of your Cheese Sandwich stories! They're all so good! Especially the Cheesepie ones.
yes yes YES! and the song poor vic.....
and Cheese hes so young yet he seems to know a lot. hes such a sweetheart.
That's a sweet story. Great job. I wish we new about who Rose is. This story made me smile.
A beautiful, sweet story
thank you 
A very original story! I enjoyed both the subject matter and the execution. Mighty fine.
D'aww Cheese is so cute in this. Very nice story
How did Cheese know who Rose was?
5282302 It's his party pony magic. But in my universe, it's a LOT more subtle than most CheesePie writers have it. Instead of being obvious, the magic lends subtle hints here and there only when needed. It's essentially passive magic.
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Passive mind reading.
HEY!!! I play retirement homes ALL THE TIME!!! This pony tale's right up my alley!!
Hmm... this tune sounds like another modern adaption of an old Irish pub song... hmm...
'Gonna go look for it, me bucko!'
*gallops out*
*gallops back*
FOUND IT! "Moonshiner's Song" by the Clancy Brothers!
St. Patty's Day again!