• Member Since 17th Nov, 2013
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Rose Quartz


My favorite characters on the show are Applejack, Rarity. And my favorite episodes are Sweet and Elite, and Rarity takes Manehatten. And I want my stories to be famous like Cupcakes and Bubbles.

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One night, Rarity finds a sleeping baby filly on her doorstep named "Christabelle" or Belle for short. So she and her husband Trenderhoof decide to raise her. But Belle goes through bullying and other problems through out her life.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 20 )

Nice so far, the chapters seem a little short but it seems like a pretty good story.

What he said, this could be a greatstory but the ideas need to be more developed.

There's a typo on the word "heavens" and there are some minor punctuation issues, but there are plenty of folks around here who would be happy to help you out in the capacity of editor or proofreader. You might want to look into one of the groups dedicated to that...

Looks like little Christy (what I call her) is her mother's daughter.

5093955 Shes more like Sweetiebelle

Oh my Celestia this is too awesome

That's so sad! Belle should have responded with "at least my parents chose me. Your parents are stuck with you"

5157405 OH MY GLOB >:( IM SUCH AN IDIOT

5157852 You're not an idiot!! D:

5157875 Can I use that for a later chapter

And the plot thickens!:derpyderp1: :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy:

I hope the next foal's a filly. She can be named Harper after the mother.

"HE'S SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE THAT IM GONNA DIE", said Belle

I don't know why, but that line reminded me of you.

Anyways, this Chapter was so cute and I can't wait for the foal to be born.

This chapter want stupid. It was good c:

Oohhh!!! I love all the drama in this!:raritywink:

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