Rainbow Dash's brother is getting married, and she's not happy about that. Especially when she meets the bride.
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- Member Since 17th Nov, 2013
- offline last seen May 8th, 2020
Rose Quartz
My favorite characters on the show are Applejack, Rarity. And my favorite episodes are Sweet and Elite, and Rarity takes Manehatten. And I want my stories to be famous like Cupcakes and Bubbles.
Rose Quartz
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Nice Troll-fic. Real nice.
4392369 it is not a Troll-fic
4392389 If that's what you want
4392410 yeah i want that because i know this story is not a Troll-fic and the owner of this account would never make a Troll-fic story
4392418
Gotcha.
Well, enjoy yourself
4392506 ok
I don't know why, but I'm rather enjoying this. Its almost like a comic book without pictures, please keep it up.
I saw it coming.
well this can only go badly
Ah, I see what you did there.
But, first, let me give you some advice.
The story is good. You have good grammar (Not that I'm proof, but I know how bad grammar looks). You just need to make bigger chapters. Make bigger plot. Chapter must have minimum 1k words. Other than that, story is great.
I wish you luck with other stories!
to fast!
4396280 :(
Lemme guess:
the bride is Lightning Dust.
Did I get it? Probably did.
4415430 read the story
did you forgot to put this story to complete since it is the end now and did you do that already and i liked it
4422797 Sorry, forgot again LOL
4422831 ok and that ok lol
4396280
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Meh, The conflicts were resolved a tad too quickly, and it was pretty short in general, but it was an okay read. At least it wasn't Utterly Ridiculous like some of the other fictions I've read. I'd give it a solid 3 outta 5.
Interesting Story. I think you did a great job, I just wished you added in some more background detail.
this is really short!
What the heck does that mean!?
4415430
Um, That was already mentioned in the chapter 3 or so. I'm not sure.
No offense
That escalated quickly and cooled down even faster. It was still pretty good tho...
Awesome story. It just needs a lot more detail.