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Shpoople96 #1 · Sep 20th, 2014 · · · I: Sit In Ludos Incipe | A Prologue ·

Books. Old, ancient, forbidden and grotesque tomes holding grotesque secrets within their eldritch and dusty pages.

You really don't want to use the word 'grotesque' twice in such close succession.

Mr Anomalous #2 · Sep 20th, 2014 · · · I: Sit In Ludos Incipe | A Prologue ·

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Look over your writing a million times and you'll always miss something.

Thanks, Mr. Pixel.

Shpoople96 #3 · Sep 20th, 2014 · 1 · · I: Sit In Ludos Incipe | A Prologue ·

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You may be your own harshest critic, but that doesn't always mean you're the best suited for the job.

terrycloth #4 · Sep 20th, 2014 · · · I: Sit In Ludos Incipe | A Prologue ·

5028709 Sometimes that sort of repetition works. Usually you wouldn't have other adjectives in the first list though.

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