Techie Hoof just got out of college and was about to leave Manehatten, but he needs money. So he gets a job at "Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria". Not knowing about the last 'incident'.
( I just wanted to make this story just cuz. Now I know I'm late for the whole Five Nights at Freddy's craze but just role with me here. Oh and this story is not cannon with any other Techie stories. It still has the same back story it's just that I don't want any confusion for any of my other Techie stories.)
Chapters (3)
>Out of collage
He probably should have stayed there a bit longer
You need a proofreader.
Also
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5033380 Yeah, I know all of my other proofreaders are too busy working on other stuff,
"advice"
"wander"
5033404 I can be your prove reader until your regular ones get back! Just send me a message!
5034797 Well alright then fella! Sounds like a plan. So what do I send? The next chapter? The current chapter?
5034807
First!: I am a girl. Not everyone is a guy and I don't feel like pulling a Crowne Prince.
Second!: Send the next chapter please!
5034815 Right sorry about that
I have a bed tendency to think some people on the internet are guys. But sure I'll send you the next chapter, but it won't be right now if anything it would come to you by... Maybe... I don't really know, I'm working on a short story today and I have no idea how long it might take me, see I made a blog about which mlp shipping thing I should make into a story, and only one person voted so in turn I'm making a shipping story, I don't want to give away which ship however.
But sure when I find the time I'll be able to type the chapter up and send it to you!
5034829
Don't worry about the guy thing! I'm a tomboy but that doesn't mean I'm gonna go on the internet and say I'm a guy! But I'll be ready for the chapter whenever you send it. It other words:
I'M READY FOR FREDDY!!!!
5034846 Alright then!
i would love to see the next chapters of this story! its getting very interesting now....and i wonder if techie will survive the whole week
5034829 did you just apologize for saying fella? on the internet? where anonymity is everywhere? where it's impossible to tell someone's gender unless they go out of their way to make a deal out of it?
5037002 Well, I wanted to be polite is all.
5070236 Ok, then don't read it. You don't gotta be a dick about it.
5072197 Well you could have gone with out the rudeness buddy! If you don't want to read it you didn't have to dislike and comment. That's the one thing I don't like about certain people on this site is that they are so quick to judge. Instead of reading the story they dislike and comment. Now if you didn't want to read the story you could have when about your business without reading it. (I'm not saying that it's pure gold but still) but instead you decide to dislike and comment. WTF bro?
5076926 it's alright, apology taken.
Aw! You didn't send it to me like you said!
5088347 Oh crap, sorry. I would have but the thing is, is that I've been very busy with my other story and my collab story. Sorry for forgetting
5088370
It's quite alright, don't worry
Good! I noticed a few mistakes, but nothing major. Here:
"No, no it's fine! I promise I wont tell anypony!" Nectar promised.
Won't has a comma.
"And before him this warehouse was a the base..."
Remove the unneeded "a" before "the".
"my dad built this thing a while back..."
Capitalize the "m" in "my".
"And with everything collected he head out."
He headed out, past tense on head.
Look, Techie I realize that this might..."
You actually forgot the first quotation.
Sorry if I'm a bit of a grammar and punctuation solider, but I wanna be a lawyer when I get older.
Also, don't use Techie's name more than twice in the same paragraph.
Other than those little tidbits, wonderful chapter!
5128417 Well I thank you kindly! Sometimes my hands move too fast for the keyboard and I tend to mess things up.
And don't worry, when I read something else, I tend to be a grammar nazi too, so you're not alone.
Plz make a sequel for FNaF 2 and have him take Nectar with him.
5202486 Okay, here's the problem with that...
Witch chapter are you on? Because the following message I'm going to send will probably be a spoiler if you haven't read up to the most recent chapter. Or to anyone else who's reading it.
5202494 I read the whole story, it was good.
I'm saying you should make a sequel for FNaF 2, plus Techie already used a Freddy Mask.
Well since it was a somewhat success in my terms.
I guess I could make a sequel. But it probably wont have Techie in it. Maybe Nectar will be in it, but probably with a different OC since if you remember when Techie was banned from it. Plus I'm pretty sure he wouldn't want to go back there.
But a sequel could be in order
Darn it. I thought for sure that it would involve these guys:
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blowing up all the animatronics.