• Member Since 10th Jun, 2013
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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

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Twilight Sparkle awakens in a different world with no memory of how she ended up there. A place filled with strange creatures and horrible things, she is trapped by the land's authority and barraged by questions. Fearing the worst Twilight seeks to escape quickly and return home. Unfortunately, her new hosts have other plans for the poor unicorn...

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Comments ( 2 )

S'good.

let's see, critiques... critiques... There isn't much to say really. It's very difficult to describe people without using anatomical vernacular, and you did that very well. I wish I could say something useful except that I really enjoyed this prologue...

Imma click the star and wait now.

Nice start. Let's see where this will go.

My only disappointment is that the early arrival of the human dashed my hopes for an ontological mystery. But you can't have everything.

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