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draygan


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I clicked on this expecting Vinyl and Octavia getting fucked by snakes, and all I got was a vore story. :fluttershyouch:

Good story <3 I love it

5025637 I'm honestly not sure how you saw that working. Snakes don't exactly have penises as far as I'm aware. Then again, I thought this was a cock worship fic. So we're both thrown for a loop on its contents.

5025821 Tail in one pussy, head in the other, snake writhes around inside to stimulate it's masters. I do believe snakes have internal anatomy rather than external, claspers if memory serves me right, but this would be snake on mares.

Woo~ That was pretty awesome. even if I don't much like the whole harsh side with drugs and things, i suppose it's necesary for the plot.
You wrote it very well~
*applauds* :yay:

This isn't very...look. The characters aren't in character, the plot makes no sense, and the protagonist is a horrid person. This is a not a good story.

I personally prefer headfirst since that's how snakes eat their prey. It was still okay I guess.

Needs more cock vore instead. :ajsmug:

Niccccce! :trollestia:

Some post-vore scat would be a nice addition though. Or maybe even Wubsy pooping remains of Octavia on his owner, to provide some drama... :pinkiecrazy:

5025821 you do realise that snakes are not asexual right?
That a male and female snake have to breed inorder to create new snakes
Most reptiles ive heard of have this little slot, inbtween their hinde lefs where their penises are stored in until they are needed

5029621 The only experience, or knowledge, I have of snakes is having to evacuate a zoo because the anaconda escaped.

5029542 Well, I may write an alternate version to this story, since the post vore section was a lot more tame than I like. This version is what my requester wanted. Also, I hope that the way I wrote the ending gave certain implications, that maybe Vinyl was just gone for the day or maybe, just maybe she ended up somewhere warm, hot, and caustic.

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Alternate version would be great! The more twisted and evil and dark the better! :pinkiecrazy:

I don't know why I'm aroused by this...

HEY HEY HEY! This is my requested story! Don't ruin it... :fluttercry:

But...I MAY want an explicit version. Two ways to do it because my friend was a tiny bit unhappy with the result. :pinkie crazy:

Digestion iz mah fetish. :derpyderp1:

5029697 Technically speaking they do not have A penis. They have two.

Also...I was unaware that such a disturbing thing could make me want to continue reading. Damn you awkward boner!

Speaking as someone who loves pot, I think Vinyl would have needed to be on something a hell of a lot stronger than pot for this to make any sense. Maybe if she was vaporizing liquid THC (which is a thing btw) then I'd believe it. On my best high I never imagine the dog talking to me, or the cat for that matter. In my experience I've never had mild halucinations smoking pot, so I find this hard to believe. The part where Vinyl zoned out and missed half of what happened I can believe, though barely given what was going on. Then again that could just be me, cause I love snakes and probably would have had my eyes glued to the situation. Then again I'd probably be aware enough to realize what was actually happening and been freaking out too despite personal fascinations, so there's that too.


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The characters aren't in character

I just feel the need to draw attention to this. Apparently the characters that have never had a line of spoken dialog throughout the entire series or had any actually canonical personality traits other than music genre preference established are not in character... In character according to who?

PS Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think either of them spoke in the second movie either. I haven't actually seen it yet, but I'm pretty sure my friend who had seen it would have been fangasming about it if they did. Hence I'm assuming they didn't.

5314839 Octavia. The only one to speak, and she had ONE LINE only.

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