• Member Since 25th Nov, 2013
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THEJamiboi


I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.

Comments ( 14 )

does this take place in the main continuity, or the grand dinner continuity?

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Main continuity, since Shady Grove exists here and Ruby isn't going to digest Chloe, she's just gone out for a night of fun.

This was a fun read, looking forward to see more of your work again soon.

Lovely story. What an excellent Halloween surprise.

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Thanks, glad you liked it :)

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And such a tasty treat for Ruby~

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Why does it seem like that at the end though?
Sorry, just nitpicky and bothered about the hypnosis... Thinking what Chloe would probably think if it wore off...

All in all though a really sexy story!.

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It was meant to seem like Ruby's intentions were shadowy, as in, she might take Chloe away to make into a maid or something. And if the hypnosis wore off before Ruby ate Chloe, Chloe would tried to dominate Ruby, it's what she does XD

But glad you liked it :)

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Thanks for reasonable resonse!

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No problem, I like talking with people who read my work :)

Where's Chloe going to wake up tomorrow morning?

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