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THEJamiboi
I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
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Such a great and detailed start! It's wonderful to visit this universe again. The way you write Ruby is so intimidatingly sexy, like she truly *is* a goddess! As much as I like nice Ruby from your true canon, there are many parts of this version I simply adore!
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Yeah I love dark Ruby too, in fact she's more fleshed out now than nice Ruby really XD That wans't meant to happen, but still fun.
Twin glanced at his wings, flushing deeply “Stupid… sexy lamia.”
lmao
Also nice inclusion of a mageftiki dance.
Gosh. that brainwashing, so lovely.
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Can't resist dem sneks~
And thanks, I love that dances so much!
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Didn't take much, he was pretty much already there after the last few days~
This was quite good, though the lack of Twin actually getting eaten left me feeling a bit dissapointed, as vore is more my thing than mind control and such.
Still, a very good read! Liked and favorited.
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Thank you and maybe next time, he just managed to escape... for now~
This had been a very good reading, I like how Twinwing didn't realized that he had had hypnotic sessions with Ruby and we only realize it at the very end. I think the ending was more satisfying with then the original with how his will is completely subsumed by his mistress now. I hope to see more of this world again soon.
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Glad you enjoyed it and yeah I liked this ending too, but I wanted Bolt to maintain his mind more than Twin here, hence the different endings. Still they're both good in my eyes cause they work with the story they're in. :)
Wow! That was hot!
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Thank you ^///^
...holy shit that was a good twist.
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He's a good obedient little pet now :3
Not bad. The prior story was better though with its world building and background stuff that kept things interesting. Would be happy to read more, and if there was ever an ending or such, hope to see the lamnia driven out of Equestria and get some comeuppance for their atrocities.
But I’m sure they could contiue to do what lamias do best at a different time and place.
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Well commissions are typically a little more dependent on what the payer wants, plus I do by word count so world building had to be minimal to get what the commissioner wanted through, you know?
Also, why would you want the lamias out? They are jusssst sssso loveable, pleasssse change your mind, like everyone else in Equestria~! :3
Nuu, the poor maid..
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Yesssssssss the poor maid issss sssssssupper and you besssssst behave or you'll be dessssssssssssssert~
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...soooo...I guess this is a bad time to bring up that I may or may not have...broken a few priceless vases 
Uhmm..
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Yes, it would be a very bad time. But I'm sure it'll be okay, you can just 'pay back' what you damaged in services as a meal. Every 100 bits you get eaten once!
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..which is way it was my evil twin.
I...I suppose that is fair.
Great story by the way. I really enjoyed it!!
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Thank you glad you liked it and family must assist in paying :3
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soo you wait riiight here 
Ah..well...I need to uhh..go get him.
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Aaaannnnd you're a coil bulge now :3
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Worth it! Belly nuzzles :3
implied regeneration?
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Correct :3
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what does that mean?
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Um... that the pony is going to be brought back off screen, thus hinting that no harm has been done and it is still soft vore?
Well, I was mainly reading this for the hypnosis aspect but the way you described the Lamias...
Are you going to possibly continue this story maybe a resistance spy who gets a little too deep working at the manor? (idk) Besides all the naughty stuff I loved the world building you did! I overall enjoyed this story 11/10 I actuslly found myself falling into trance reading some chapters.
Nice touch with the fractionation
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Hehe, good slave and maybe, we'll see I'm currently working on some lamia commissions though I do have a story rp I'm proof reading that I did with a friend and it does involve the protagonist working for the rebels :3
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Like its hard to explain but I am just reading along and I just gradually start to become to relaxed to read anymore. Btw the way you described Lamias and their coils made me think about them in a totally different way than I thought I ever would including vore.
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Yesss, pleasssse submit to me (sorry had to) Anyway, I'm glad I got you into all this, means a lot to introduce a new person into the delights of the church of snek :3
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Too bad RP is disallowed otherwise I might join in
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What's up? (Just so you know fimfic doesn't allow rping)