Threatening love

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Blitz Habanera Tuscania

Blitz Habanera Tuscania #1 · Oct 7th, 2015 · · ·

Just gonna say, that from the home page your coverpic for some reason looks like a misshapen face and I had to figure out what the hell it was.

Revenant Wings

Revenant Wings #2 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · ·

You're doing better on your dialogue; I see for the most part it stays to a single character's actions and lines in the same paragraph more often than before, and it makes it a little easier to read.

However, as much as you've improved and as well written as it is, I'm not giving it a like because I can't stomach domination / rape. It is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

THEJamiboi

THEJamiboi #3 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · ·

6503137 Does it? XD Well if it made you investigate this story it technically did it's job

THEJamiboi

THEJamiboi #4 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · ·

6503521 Glad to know I'm getting better and, to each their own. :)

Dagan4d2

Dagan4d2 #5 · Oct 10th, 2015 · · ·

Anyway, who was Charcoal? Charcoal was a dark ash coloured grey Earth pony stallion, he had a tussle of messy black hair, and his tail was in a similar state of miss care, and his cutie mark was a small pile of deep white charcoals with a few red hot embers between them.

This is awkward. The double and, the sudden shift, it was just awkward.

cssalpha

cssalpha #6 · Oct 30th, 2015 · · ·

Is there going to be a sequal? Please tell me there is going to be a sequal.

THEJamiboi

THEJamiboi #7 · Oct 30th, 2015 · · ·

6583128 Yes there will be a sequel, first I want to get some Spiral and Spices chapters done, I'll then try to get the sequel done after that. :)

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #8 · Jul 21st, 2017 · · ·

XD What the hell am I doing? I've made a mini series in the Author notes what the hell?
That's what I want to know!?

The Everfree forest. Though dangerous it allowed Charcoal some sweet solitude… So he took it upon himself to build a house deep within
Is his address gonna be like:
Everfree Forest
Pobox #2
Since Zecora also lives in there?

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