• Member Since 25th Nov, 2013
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THEJamiboi


I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.

Comments ( 15 )

it was a fun read, not much of a plot,or development but still.

Incredibly lovely story! Absolutely hot!

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There was a fair bit of plot during the end! :scootangel:
Sorry, but yeah it was a commission and meant to be near straight sex throughout, so yeah... but glad you enjoyed :3

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Thanks man, wish I wasn't suddenly so popular with everyone wanting a story, really want to get on with Corrupted Age >.< But glad you liked it regardless.

Alrighty, firstly it was a pleasure to commission you again for such a great story! You really brought Scarlett and Galactic to life and it was fantastic to see them interact with Ruby and Bolt. Ruby and Scarlett seemed to really have fun between themselves and with their significant others ^^ Plus Bolt and Galactic seemed to have a blast^^ Plus seeing that Ruby had her submissive side thanks to Ruby made things interesting. Great work and I will be sure to come back to you with some other ideas.

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Yay! I'm glad you liked it so much, glad you enjoyed the story and that it was worth the wait, Scarlett and Galactic were fun to play with, as was the idea of Ruby being a sub.

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I’m glad you think so^^ When I do commission you again, it should be the idea of Scarlett in the Lamia ruled Equestria.

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Cool, looking forward to making her adventures... 'blissful' :3

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^^ I’m sure it’ll be quite the story.

Oh, crap... dis gonna be good!

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I'm glad you think so :3

This story is hot indeed. Especially the two submissive stallions. I like the ending you set up for them

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :3

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