That...was both adorable and sexy in equal amounts. Bravo, good sir or madam! You have supplied truly high-quality entertainment this day!

Yay! This story is alive and finally done!
Completely enjoyed it! My favorite mare X my favorite stallion.

Also, as a side note, as a Sparity fan, thank thee for those minor Sparity hints in your story.

That last chapter definitely delivered in every way. The feel of love between the two was amazing.

And leave it to Rarity to make Twilight blush almost harder than Mac made her.

sequel please

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I'll give you a maybe.

yay it lives but boo for not expanding more and using condoms ponies have a heat cycle for a reason and i have a fetish for cumming into somebody that you failed to deliver on but haazza for the end of a story

It would be nice to see a followup to this story

Holy shit I read this way back when and felt so off put by the "ending" and then almost 10 years later I discover you DID finish it! Wow what a story. Good job! Glad to finally realize it was completed.