That was nice. Aside from the sexy parts, I actually really like that Twilight stopped everything and wanted to establish her relationship with Mac before they went at it. It put her hesitation in perspective, and also brought a little romance to which was honestly just two people/ponies knobbing for the heck of it. I mean, really, it's probably not a good idea to have that talk after the guy already has his condom on and is raring to go, but still. Better late than never.
Also, I noticed that you referred to Big Mac's "hands" in a couple of instances instead of hooves.
I don't know if you should have gone to intercourse that quickly. You should just have kept the bondage angle and do things like pet-play and domination.
That was nice.
Aside from the sexy parts, I actually really like that Twilight stopped everything and wanted to establish her relationship with Mac before they went at it. It put her hesitation in perspective, and also brought a little romance to which was honestly just two people/ponies knobbing for the heck of it.
I mean, really, it's probably not a good idea to have that talk after the guy already has his condom on and is raring to go, but still. Better late than never.
Also, I noticed that you referred to Big Mac's "hands" in a couple of instances instead of hooves.
I don't know if you should have gone to intercourse that quickly. You should just have kept the bondage angle and do things like pet-play and domination.