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Nightmare Moons Dalek


Hail to the Daleks, baby... "An angry, Whovian nerd with a Nightmare Moon fetish." - Stiggerzz.

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Cold and separated, Twilight, Fluttershy, Rainbow, Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie find themselves in the past during the Ice Age. Slowly they meet our favorite sub-zero heroes in their adventure to get the baby to its "herd". Can the ponies work with the idiotic Sid the Sloth, the questionable Diego the Sabre-Toothed Cat, and the grumpy Manny the "Moody" Mammoth on this quest? And will they learn more about their new "friends" along the way?

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7849886/1/My-Little-Pony-Ice-Age

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 75 )

Well... This is certianly a crossover I never saw coming. Not sure what to think about it really.

Alright. Problem with the centred paragraphs.

1291105 Agreed. But continue, I like where this is going.:pinkiehappy:

:1291105 Yeah I was watching Ice Age one day then BOOM INSTANT STORY IDEA!!!!!

Aru

Hmm...another story I'm going to watch. Good idea, I watched few days ago 1st Ice Age in TV again so I'm waiting for more.

1291774 Thanks! reviews feed my story writing insanity :pinkiecrazy:

1291594 Hehe, I love your usename. I think the Daleks are awsome! :twilightsheepish:

1291956
THATS BECAUSE WE ARE SUPREME! :moustache:

I was surprised that this username wasn't taken before me. And with me being an insane Doctor Who fan, even more so then My Little Pony, and completely Dalek crazy at the time I had to :derpytongue2:

1292055 I know, I'm a huge Dr Who fan too. What did you think of the latest episode? The one with the Cyborg Cowboy in? I thought it was really good!

1292152 As like most Doctor Who episodes, with the exception of Love and Monsters, I loved it. The Doctor is certainly changing which I think is gonna be a major plot point by the end of the season, I agreed with the Doctor wanting a Dalek over scared people in the episode being somewhat disappointed (not by much mind you) with Asylum of the Daleks, and I found it somewhat heartbreaking. I kinda figured that Isaac had done bad stuff when the Doctor went into his ship but I didn't see him regretting it until he admitted it, I love the Cyborg hes like "I'm gonna kill these people if hes not out here." but doesn't fulfill his promise and I was half expecting him to kill them all. Finally 11 mentioned the Master (2nd fav Doctor Who villain :derpytongue2:) after all this time, I was beginning to suspect he forgot about him. Still over all I loved it my 2nd favorite of Series 7 so far, can't wait for the Weeping Angels to take over Manhatten! :pinkiehappy:

Unique. I want to see more!

1292342 You will! sometime tomorrow or later tonight...I can't really say because I ain't sure myself :applejackunsure:

1293863 no problem. Take your time to make the crossover blend well. I was going to try a crossover with something, but it seemed just not my style to write. My story is its own, but I'm using ideas from many other shows and movies to add some cool touches to it

1294122 hey do you know any editors on here? So far I have 8 chapters up, but I'm doing it from my iPhone since my computer is down, so it is hard to see all grammer mistakes

1294181 Nope sorry, but I might be able to help you there try this. http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=27 a commenter on a failed story of mine left me this for help

Love the idea. Minor pet peeve though, break up the paragraphs. It's not a wall-o-text, but it needs a little variation.

1299304 Ok thanks for the review, glad its its only a minor pet peeve :derpytongue2:

Just to point it out but theres only one speaker a paragraph

good work. blending them well into it. Just remember, whenever one character is speaking, when another character starts you should start another chapter. besides that it was a really good chapter. Now, im curious how you are going to fit Rainbow and Rarity in here :rainbowhuh: . Cant wait to see!

1313205 Hmm well that's gotta be fixed, thanks for pointing that out I'll get to work on that.
1313651 Yeah I'm getting ready to work on that. I was a little dissatisfied in the blending thinking that it wasn't enough, glad to see you liked it. Thanks for the review. Glad that you were satisfied with this chapter despite the...huge mistakes I made there. I got where i'm putting in Rarity but I don't know where I'll put in Rainbow :derpyderp2:

1313205 1313651 Alright I fixed those mistakes....about 8 hours ago...yeah...

~signed by the Supreme Dalek

Aru

Yeah I knew that Manfred is going to be doomed for not only Sid, but Pinkie too.

1319073 well hes blessed with a family in later movies so yeah, he must suffer now :pinkiecrazy: :trollestia:

~signed by the Drone Dalek

HMM. Will wait for continuation

1323350 I will continue it, but tomorrow. I could've waited until this was complete but I realized I could've it posted by now if it wasn't for my slip up :twilightsheepish: so I decided to post a preview, but I don't plan to post anymore previews unless I need to. Thanks for the review, surprised someone posted a comment already :rainbowlaugh:

1323358 well, i was planning on putting my next chapter up, but will also hold off until tomorrow. for some reason this one chapter is extremely hard to write :twilightangry2: . anyway, saw your story updated, so.... thought id check it out:rainbowwild:

1323364 lol :rainbowlaugh: But as I said, expect the finished chapter in the next or four

will do. be prepared for mine as well. :trixieshiftright: epicness will continue

sid: "you have beautiful eyes." :rainbowlaugh: i couldn't stop laughing

Sup, I'm here now too :pinkiehappy:.

Hum, it says you updated but there's nothing new... :rainbowhuh:

1793860 I finished the chapter and ended it with a cliffhanger :moustache: I'm putting up a :moustache: because I don't know what emoticon to put...........:trollestia: I'm making the next chapter as we speak...I'm sure this one is disappointing to you guys who've waited for this. I plan for the next chapter to be the longest yet since we have the action scene with the sabres and the night with Manfred and Sid

Nice chapter! :pinkiehappy:. The only problem I saw was the lack of emotion by Pinkie and Fluttershy's part with Nadia. I mean, the mother of a baby just died and not even a :fluttershysad: or :pinkiesad2: face. Except for that, everything's looking good :twilightsmile:.

1853762 Damn my inexperience with writing :rainbowlaugh: I tried to imply that they were silent, and as shocked as Manny and Sid. I'm not trying to write perfection, I'm using what I've learned in school to my advantage. I'll fix that scene later, my damned cousin won't shut up :trixieshiftleft:

Sweet chapter! I approove. :twilightsmile: But i have to agree with Sabo88 on his comment. All in all great stuff to read. :pinkiehappy:

1855781 Thanks for the comment and I'll fix that problem soon

Interesting premise...will read later. :trixieshiftright:

1925565 Do as you wish, I hope you enjoy thought I must say don't expect a masterpiece, I'm surprised that people actually liked this. :rainbowderp: Rate this however you think it deserves.

Huh, an Ice Age crossover, surprised but pleased to see that!!:twilightsmile: Also, I see that you're a Doctor Who fan! *high fives for being a Whovian*:pinkiehappy:

1925635 I wanted to write a MLP/Ice Age crossover and I find that I'm one of the first, if not the first to write one :twilightblush:. Daleks don't high five, we exterminate (Whovians FTW!). :pinkiehappy:

1925653 According to the search bar, you are indeed the first here! *exterminates a random plant to substitute for a high five*:pinkiecrazy:

1925685 I know right, I did the same thing on deviantART, Fan Fiction, etc. This is the only MLP/Ice Age story written or drawn. The only way I've seen MLP crossed with Ice Age was Derpy having Scrat's Nut Heaven scene with muffins and attacking Rainbow and Fluttershy on devinatART.

1925752 Thank you, thank you :rainbowwild: I'm surprised that no one people have written Jurassic Park/MLP and not MLP/ Ice Age.

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