After 13 years of jail time, our detective has a chance to renew his title with this case: Ponies are missing, a celebrity was caught in the midst of this and he is the only one capable of figuring out who "done did do'ed" it. Follow our detective as he finds not only the victims and the kidnapper, but also what makes a pony whole.
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Going nuclear on comments is a great way to have folks flooding into your story. Not the kind of interest you want. Unless they are way off topic or telling someone to kill themselves, leave the comments be. Even site staff had a blog post about it.
4956016 Sorry. I let the comments get to my head and well, nuked them cause I didn't want to see my joy turned to cinders...Sorry
Since the comments got nuked, anyone care to tell what they were about?
4956355
Author said he was "too lazy" to fix the misspelled titled. I replied to him, saying if he was too lazy to fix the title then he had no hope of being a great writer.
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I'm glad to see you really weren't too lazy to fix the title.
4956656 Fixed the title and also re did that long description too. So that should put me back into the running of a great author/writer
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Well, you're back in the running, but you've got a long way to go before you're in first.
Keep at it.
Error in the description:
*midst
5298407 Fixed
5298416
Not really. Now it says "midts".
I decided to read the first chapter to remember what this fic was about before reading the second. I caught some errors you might want to fix.
It should be "no more than a fortnight." More than a fornight could be as long as Luna's banishment, since 1000 years is certainly more than a fortnight.
*If they keep
You should change that period to a "..."
*takes its toll
*catch
*meant
I'm not even sure what you were trying to say here. "Area of expertise" maybe?
Was what? The phrase is incomplete.
Okay. There are probably more, but that should be good for now. On to prereading the next chapter.