• Member Since 10th Jul, 2013
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Derpy has never seen the Doctor regenerate...until now. As the Doctor is regenerating, something strange happens: He turns into a mare. Now he has to learn how to deal with his new body and stop a threat against Celestia and all of Equestria.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 24 )

Not bad so far, but I think you could have just written those as a single chapter.

i like the story.. i just hope the doccor becoming a girl really is the main conflict of the story

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I'd go so far as to say that if you combined both chapters, it would be half of a short chapter. Don't just blitz through the story, friend.

3006623 I for one prefer the opposite approach. Have the gender change be a big part of the story, but not have it be the driving force.

3006794 it would make for an interesting story though

How do you all like the story so far? I'm getting a lot of what the center point of the story should be. He being a girl is a conflict, but not the center point of the story.

Feels a bit rushed and the scenes don't connect to each other.

3007286 It shows promise, but I think you could put some effort into having it flow better.

I see, I need to connect bits and pieces together better. On it!:rainbowdetermined2:

Thinking about it, wouldn't the Doctor remain a mare until at least her next regeneration?

3011679 I sense a book series about to rise from this. :pinkiehappy:

I like what I can see of your post-regen Doc. Do you have a full body pic of her done up?

3011903 A profile pic, that's it...and a few expressions. I made a tumblr for him...her...it'll take a while for me to get use to his regeneration into a girl.

3012887 Can you send me a link to it?

3014145 Will as soon as I can find the right sketch book. :twilightsheepish:

3016297 I was more asking about a link to the tumblr you mentioned.

3016579 On my profile for here. There is a link to it there. I'll be making a comic start for it soon.

Good so far. Love your profile pic.:pinkiehappy:

3100032 Thank you. :pinkiesmile: I love to here feedback from the readers.

3103019 and i love to give it:twilightsmile:

Poor Doctor, just can't catch a break.

this turning into a good story I await your next chapter when you write it:twilightsmile:

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