• Published 8th Aug 2014
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The Amazing Spider-Man: The Web of Friendship - Time Pony Victorious



Peter Parker, intrepid photographer and moonlighting superhero, stumbles into the world of ponies! How will he cope being a pony... without hands?!

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Preview

TWILIGHT

The day was going great.

Until, of course, it wasn’t.

By the time the cows were done with their stampede, Twilight didn’t think this day could go any worse. Then Discord showed up.

Materializing in a puff of smoke, Discord guffawed relentlessly, practically doubling over, in fact that’s exactly what he did. He spun around, holding his stomach, as he laughed. Twilight pushed the wet mane from her eyes and glared at the Spirit of Chaos but he wasn’t very fazed. After all, it was difficult being intimidating covered in chicken feathers.

Peter didn’t look any better. His SpiderColt costume was torn so his fur stuck out oddly, like Twilight he was covered from head to hooves in tar and chicken feathers. It was difficult to tell from behind his mask, but Twilight knew he was glaring at Discord as well.

“Hilarious!” Discord cried, wiping a tear from his eyes.

Peter tilted his head and took a step forward, not many ponies would ever think about getting closer to Discord they mostly would rather run away screaming.

“Wait, that voice…” he muttered.

“And who says Canterlot lacks culture!” Discord continued, ignoring Peter. “I must say in 20,000 years, this is the most fun I’ve had here!”

“Discord, did you cause all of this?” Twilight asked, gesturing to the chaotic town square. Sparsely throughout the square lay chickens running rampant and wayward cows grazing wherever they could.

“Of course not!” Discord said, grinning broadly. He sounded genuine but he was a Spirit of Disharmony therefore the Prince of Liars.

Twilight huffed, rolling her eyes and looked over to Peter who, for some reason, was angrily pacing. “Peter, what’s--”

“It’s him!” Peter yelled, hysterically, pointing accusingly at Discord. “He’s the reason I’m here!”

“What? I don’t--”

Peter marched up to Discord, either bravely, or stupidly, staring down the draconequus. “YOU brought me here, right?!”

Perhaps it’d be better to start at the beginning, no?

Comments ( 21 )

really it have to be that short? after all this time!

6445119

I literally wrote that within ten minutes but then some stuff came up and I couldn't finish it. I felt bad about not giving you guys anything for such a long time so I decided to release it as a preview. If you don't like it, I can stop releasing previews and leave you guys waiting longer.

6445255 4 mouth and 4 day of wait. I was hope to read more.

6445287

Something is something. Isn't it? Better than nothing, right?

6445354 fuck you right sometime angry get of me lot.
so next time. make it less then few mouth. please?

6445383

It isn't like I've got a life/job outside of writing about ponies tho. Something is something is what I'm saying. You aren't paying for this content, right?

Cool. Glad to see something from this story.

6446565

Thank you. This is how you comment positively, people. Take note.

6446758 No problem pal.

6446758 nice to see your alive and well, cool preview hope to read the rest soon :twilightsmile:

Discooooord...

*Cries*
This chapter makes as much sense as the last...
PLEASE GO BACK TO MAKING SENSE!!!!
:raritydespair:

6446758 so is this story dead?

8166945 ok, it's just since it wasn't cancelled yet I wasn't sure

Nooooooooooooooooooo! It was getting really interesting as well!

Is this on Hiatus?

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