What happens when Metal fight beyblade characters enter in the magical land of Equestria? What will Lyra and her background pony friends do to help? (Any beyblade fans out there?)
I'm getting bored of this story, so I'm cancelling it. Have a nice day.
yo is this a fuckin' joke or something man
gingka doesn't have a bandage on his nose in that cover picture
followin'
2377291 This picture was not drawn by me. So leave it.
2377788 If you don't like it PLEASE don't read or least comment. If this story is not your type leave it alone. I want to continue it on my own free will. Geez, why can't you beyblade haters (are you one or something?) leave this story alone?
Beggin' you. DON'T come back to this story. Please. I worked many days on this and all I receive is insults.
2377848 I think most of the downvotes are because of the giant wall of text that's making everyone's eyes bleed. That and the fact that you misspelled "prologue". And the fact that your title is one of the "My Little X: Friendship is Y" variety.
You're new here, so I'll give you a tip. People like originality here. Beyblade crossovers are done quite a bit, and always done bad. Yours is better than most, but still nothing too great.
2377870 well, I'm not the best in writing fics....
Thanks anyway....
2377291 DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO BE SUCH A NITPICKER, SO WHAT IT THE COVER DOESN'T MEET YOUR STANDARDS, GET OVER IT!!!
2377788 YOU DON'T HAVE TO BE SO FRICKING SARCASTIC I MEAN COME ON IT'S JUST A STORY, ONE THING I DON'T LIKE ARE PEOPLE BULLYING OTHER PEOPLE, THIS PLACE IS NOT FOR THAT, IT'S FOR THE ENJOYMENT OF THE STORIES PEOPLE WRITE, NOT FOR BEING RUDE.
2381108 YOU DON'T HAVE TO USE ALL CAPS, I MEAN COME ON, IT'S JUST ONE COMMENT. ONE THING I DON'T LIKE IS SOMEONE BULLYING SOMEONE ELSE, LIKE YELLING AT THEM FOR SHARING AN HONEST OPINION. THIS PLACE ISN'T FOR THAT, IT'S FOR THE ENJOYMENT OF THE STORIES PEOPLE WRITE, NOT FOR BEING RUDE.
2382766 I wasn't trying to be.
2383736 Exactly my point. Neither was he. He's sharing an honest opinion on a story simply because he has the option. Don't berate him for that.
2384406 Sorry, I never meant to be so rude, I guess I just took it the wrong way, so needless to say when I was trying to help I put a large target on my back, that's my problem, I think someone is being rude when I'm the one making it worse trying to help, putting me in the place to be yelled at. I;m soo sorry
2384556 Is fine. Just make sure to be more observant next time, neh?
2385283 Right o.k. but my computer does some strange things like when i press the shift key, it'll stay in capslock, I didn't notice until it was too late.
Hi there it is matt have fun with this story ok and let it rip
Hi there it is matt have fun with this story ok and let it rip
2463274 I'm quite busy now, and I'm working on the next chapter after my exams. Pls be patient. Thank you for appreciating my story!
2384406 Um, I don't get what his game is, what's the problem with that sentence? I mean, that sentence was describing the Cutie Mark Crusaders using paint to paint carrots as a prank. What's so bad about that sentence that he wanted me to discontinue it?
2470827... Hory shet, someone still repli- Oh.
Neh, in all honesty, he was being a bit of a dick here, nitpicking and all, but his problem is that you pointed out the obvious. "They painted the carrots" would work just as fine, without sounding incredibly redundant.
Where is the guy who has Leone? I want him in this story.
2475452 Kyoya. Nah, don't worry. He will appear when Ginga (the guy who uses pegasus) and the others who I had not mentioned in the first chapter will appear, when they find those characters who came to Equestria missing. (err... do you get what I'm saying?)
2480245 Yeah, I get what you mean. I was wondering where Ginga was.
I'm glad that your not getting any more insults on this!, This story is going to get even more interesting now that you're in a better mood!
2491214Yes it is
Yu joins the CMC? this ... is ... going to ... be ...AWESOME!!
do thay find there beys?
2480245 Tyson and Kai will always be better than those noobs.
3256233 You do realise that you're referring to the original beyblare series characters?
That's pretty much your opinion whether you think that those character are better, but just don't flame here, please?
you should have added Benkei.
Aw, this thing is cancelled? I was looking forward to the next chapter.
3578258 Yeah, but when I totally have no inspiration to continue anymore, I decide to cancel them.
Well, use your imagination to decide what happens in this story...
3582700 .......aww COME NO!!!!
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Will this continue?
Its pretty interesting
Wonder how Spike reacts to the human-turned-pony Bladers?
Say, are you the same one on Fanfiction.Net too?