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Duplex Fields


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Fluttershy ponders her life and her innate worth.

A short exploration of mood in first person purple prose. Inspired by ugugg93's "Thirteen Days without Pink".

(Trigger warning: parental abuse)

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 7 )

I'm surprised such a work of art hasn't been given the attention it deserves. :twilightsmile:

This is a very good story. Keep it up


4569744 Thank you very much.

4569617 I started typing out a very self-deprecating reply describing the very reasonable reasons it only has 43 views and two comments so far, and the obvious and inescapable reasons why it's unlikely to get much publicity in the future, when I realized I was making the same low self-esteem choices in my reply that I described in my story. So instead, I simply thank you.

This was beautiful.
No other words.
Beautiful.

I'm a Fluttershy too...

This was touching. I wish there was more of it.

> When I fell from Cloudsdale, she rode a rented balloon down to the dirt …

Oh, wow, this goes some dark places.

Very economical storytelling. It packs a lot of powerful stuff in a short space.

And I'm glad to hear you're doing well. :pinkiesmile:

I could write my own words, but I do believe the other reviews have said it all, especially the reviews of A Fox in Equestria and immagetu. Beautiful. I love how it leaves us with a sense of hope, and not that Fluttershy is utterly hopeless. Thank you for this piece of art.

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