Every Thousand years, the Elements of Harmony choose new beaers for them. Once Twilight discovered who the new Element of Magic was, she decided to wake Spike from his 100 years nap to tell him the news.
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Ooh, for a second language, this is pretty good. I love how the interactions between Spike and Twilight haven't changed much, just matured. I loved the
sounds just like Spike. So... no second chapter?
why would you do that to me?!
Otherwise, so good
You and I think alike my friend. I'm definitely gonna read this!
But the Element of Magic isn't about magic, it's about friendship, and the magic of friendship. So just because a pony has powerful magic, it doesn't mean they can harness the Element.
4556365 Yes. The magic of friendship. I had struggled with that as I wrote this, but in the show they refer to it only as "magic" and Twilight is very powerful using magic. For this story, I think that the magic is the Element and the Magic of Friendship is what happens when the 6 elements are together.
4556454 Intresting.
I like it
Nice short story.
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This is a really great story, and concept. I'd love to see it expanded! And I literally had no idea English wasn't your first language, so props to you for that, because when I try to speak my second language I end up sounding like
6429459 Thanks a lot. Sadly, I have no ideas to further develop this story and that's why I decided to elave it as an oneshot.
This story is good, but I have a question. Not just for you, but for all of the writers on this platform. Where does the theory that Alicorns grow in size come from..? A small little nitpick I have with a future-Twilight story.