Epilogue
Everypony was enjoying the dance. Applebloom and Pipsqueak were drinking punch. Scootaloo and Rumble were chatting about Rainbow Dash. Sweetie Belle and Button Mash were dancing with each other. An hour later, the dance was over. Everypony went home, but the crusaders and their dates went to the clubhouse for a sleepover. While they were there, they were talking, laughing and having fun.
"Congrats on winning Hearts and Hooves court Sweetie Belle", congradulated AB
"Yeah, you and Button deserve it", said Scootaloo
"Thanks", replied Sweetie Belle "Im just glad to be with Button"
"And Im glad to be with my queen", said Button
He took Sweetie Belle's hoof and kissed it. Sweetie Belle started to blush.
"Awwww", said AB
"EWWW", said Scootaloo, Pipsqueak and Rumble
"It's getting late, we should probably get to bed", said Pipsqueak
"Yeah, your right", said Rumble
They all got in their sleeping bags and went to sleep, but the CMC were still awake.
"Psst girls", whispered Sweetie Belle
"What", said Scootaloo
"This was the best Hearts and Hooves day ever", replied Sweetie Belle
"Yeah it sure was", said AB getting sleepy
"We have the best coltfriends ever", said Scootaloo
"We sure do Scootaloo", yawned AB "We sure do"
They went to sleep, ending their best day ever.
THE END
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4430817 Thanks, wait til you see my next story.
4431811 Who doesnt love Manecraft...or Minecraft LOL
so cute
short sweet and simple. i liked it
I loved this! ...but perhaps Lickety Split should've been AB's date instead. It woulda stuck in Diamond Tiara's craw all the more. Other than that, awesome story!
4447264 Yeah, she sure is
Oh please please please make a squeal! So cute, good plot. Yay cmcs!
4447277 I have one with the cmc's foals. Its called CMC: The Third Generation
Despite the errors in this story, I think it's pretty good!
You have all my favorite CMC shippings:
Apple Bloom X Pipsqueak, Scootaloo X Rumble, and Sweetie Belle X Button Mash!
From the looks of the comments, this story sounds like a good read. Though I would recommend combining all the chapters into one chapter and make it a one shot (500 word chapters tend to make potential readers back off).
Nevertheless, in the read later list this shall go.
I will check this sequel :)
4700338 So? I just made him a bit passionate. Besides, it's cute
Yay ButtonBelle!
Love it! But I like to ship BloomSprout.
4918695 Bloomsprout?
4918940
Apple Bloom and her Gender Bend, Apple Sprout!!
4922578 Wouldnt he be called Apple Bud?
4922689
It's technically up to you what you want to call him.
I'm writing a story in which his name is Apple Sprout, but if you want to call him Apple Bud, fell free!
We're taking heavy fire from the .50 CAL D'AWWWW cannons! We need air support!
ok loved this story loved all the ships.
hated diamond and silver but that just means you did them right.
over all grate story and I know I'm a little late on the commenting but still grate job man
I just read the comments to see if there was Buttonbelle
There was.
XDDDDDD
Nice story overall. Only concern for me is the chapters; since they are so short, it kind of lost the flow. You could've written the whole story in about 3 chapters. Apart from that, amazing!!!
Aww, a sweet ending to a sweet story.
This was a short, sweet, adorable little story. Even though there were multiple spelling errors, a few OOC moments, and some rushed scenes, you have portrayed the story and events nicely and gave us shippers a nice, ten minutes of fangirling.
So, all in all, I have enjoyed this. Nice work!
I would recommend adding the "Alternate Universe" tag given the CMC got their Cutie Marks, which are different than depicted here.
That was so beautiful I think im gonna cry (DARN IT WHY AM I SO EMOTIONAL)
This story was okay. Each chapter was short and had a few errors here and there but a simple romance fic. Thought it is weird to see the cmc with different cutie marks from the show cannon now.