I'm a RPG gamer who writes for fun, however I don't mind doing one shot stories, so pm me if you want to make a request
The first alicorn Lukilla was told that keeping a diary is nice, so that's what she does. Follow her as she lives until the last entry. The mystery of who she lived will finally be revealed.
I don't know how many entries I will do, but I hope I will do around one hundred entries.
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What do you like about it?
4472800 After I finish this, there will be a oneshot side story involving Sombra.
This is a cute story.
4487137 thank you
I'm glad that you like it.
oh and thank you for the fav
4487382 welcome!
Poor Mint!
4487958 yeah, she is a sweet filly.
............Nice!
4514380 thanks for the fav
I'm glad that you like the story
4515274 No problem.......
4522720 poor Sombra, I don't think he'll enjoy that conversation. Plus, Lukilla is very oblivious on what happened.
4522785 Yeah. Can't wait to read that.
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Just... no
4715060 Yeah, Sombra is the only one teaching and showing her thinks, well he is the only one that she is willing to listen to that is... other then Mint...
4715060 You're kind of a douche from what I've seen. Just saying.
I actually like the general idea you have here. Keep rockin'.
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That name.
This story is typically better than Shadow's Diary, but what's with all the short, nondescriptive chapters?
Is this story ever going to actually DESCRIBE ANYTHING?!
How did a textbook scold her? I'm curious.
So now Sombra's a shadow pony?
This might be interesting if it was described. At all.
It would be nice if you showed how sweet Mint was instead of just telling us.
I wonder what Mint dreamed about.
I'd put the "Alternate Universe" tag just to be safe from roving bands of "reviewers" from getting super angry and feeling justified to spit raging hot fire (and swear words, can't forget the swear words!) along with insults at you and your fic.
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That's your opinion, and I don't agree with it. And seeing as how I write more often and much better received stories than you, I'm taking my opinion over yours.
Besides, saying "nope" isn't critiquing at all. It's merely demonstrating that one can't express any reason of conflict other than through one word.
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Go ahead and think I'm a douche, it doesn't affect me either way.
4799177 it came from an rp
4799184 im trying to make it seem like an actual diary
4799191 its only a diary, are you askimg for authors notes?
4810150 Actual diaries are often more descriptive.
4810146 Not a valid excuse.
4810156 The point of a diary is not to merely recollect events, but recollect and talk about them. This can only do one at a time.
4810161 is there somthing wrong with the name?
4810157 sorry...
4810173 It sounds nothing like any known pony name.
4799195 huh... didnt notice that, i'll fix it later. unable to do it now
4799201 something wrong with that?
4799807 sorry, its difficult to write a diary for a mare if im male
4800216 im mot a fan of op characters, so i dont make op characters
Lukilla isnt op
4810178 one:oc
two:i didnt make the last name
there:sorry if it isnt to your liking
4810173 I could accept either name, but not the two together.
4810183 Other than that it came out of nowhere and removes literally all of what makes him unique, nothing.
The chronic lack of description also doesn't help. If it wasn't for Shadow's Diary, I wouldn't even know what you meant by shadow pony.
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Fresh from the IZHMASH factory
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5025845 I don't get the comment here...
4810386 well, she is oblivious and can can only do healing magic. She can't do levitation even.
4810408 well, that's okay