• Member Since 14th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Aug 17th, 2018

Saint-Mercy


Just an average brony, check me out if you got time.

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You won't understand, you can't understand. Your mind cannot comprehend the love I have. It outmatched all love, nothing can rival my love, nothing can make my trust falter, I will always love-

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Comments ( 13 )

Well...this is interesting. Either this guy is in a mental hospital, dead or maybe both.

How come all you're stories are sad?:fluttercry: I mean, not all of them are, but most have that little bit of sadness in them. Not that I don't like it, infact I love it. I'm just curious.

Anyway, good sad story. Hope you're enjoying yourself.

4415114 I dunno why, sudden ideas I guess, also thanks bro(ny)

I like it, ometimes you're stories make me think, like this one :pinkiehappy:

4415151 yesss, sooon. Think about how the world is corrupted muhaha.

4415163 The world is more corrupted than 3ds emulators you find in the internet

Sublime. :duck:

Kinda abandons the decent vagueness from time to time, but it maintains a good atmosphere nonetheless. One other criticism might be that it "isn't pony enough," i.e: we are given very few reasons for the story to have take place in the MLP universe, and one could transpose it into any other context with minimal editing. There were a few grammar issues as well. Other than that, though, it's an excellent read. Well done! :raritywink:

Also, it's good to know I'm not the only one who was inspired by White Box. Or am I wrong?

4415380 haven't read/seen it, is it a movie or a book? If book than who by?

4415733 great read, thank you for showing me that, pretty damn good.

While I understand the wish of everything being the same and equal, I'd like to point out that the truth is it simply can't be so. No two things on earth are equal or have an equal chance. Not a leaf nor a tree.

4419625 I'm not stating facts, I'm giving a perspective from the pony's mind.

I'm just saying.

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