• Published 4th Sep 2015
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Cupcake Chronicles: Twilight's Thank You Card - milesprower06



Applejack decides it's time to properly thank Twilight for all the help she's given in developing her relationship with Rainbow.

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Comments ( 7 )

I used it once on my brother after losing an argument with him before bed. So worth it.

Hmmm... :rainbowlaugh:

Oh...Ohhhhh...Ohohohoho. So that's where you're taking this. Interesting way to go about things. Twilight is my gal so I always knew once this started up I was going to be mildly biased. But come on who doesn't love some purple horse

That being said this was quick. I don't mean that in a bad way just that it jumped from escalations very quick. I'm not sure of your plans for this little fic you have here but if there's one thing I know you can do is good internal thoughts and weaving development. There was a touch of it here and there but ultimately rather than a flowing motion it more went as if by one bullet point after another. I certainly like the premise though, and now we've the possibility of the changeling as well which will only make things even better.

I'll admit when she finally got a hang of it my head canon of Twi being a erotic novel reader just got even more confirmed. Beware the smart ones, that means they know the most. :twilightsmile:

Also...

'Alone in bed... 50 Shades of Hay... She wants to be treated like this...'

I'm watching you mister.

Its nice they´re thanking Twi for their help, love this little series

Wow, I should've read this sooner.
This sequel is both sexy and funny, especially the horny Twilight.
Too bad it's too short. More please. :twilightsmile:

7558966 A mix of life and not finding the best way to go about the next chapter.

Please give us more of this!

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