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milesprower06


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IT HAS ARRIVED!

Let me guess, this thank you card ain't ginna involve just contraction paper and a pen is it?

Looks like a great beginning so far, but I can't help but dread that It'll feel like some of the stuff that'll happen later, will be because things are starting to feel routine.

I remember this story.

Do you know what you've done here in writing this story?

We've seen a very well written story about Twilight and Applejack being in a relationship, and inviting Rainbow Dash in. We've also seen a very well written story where it's Twilight and Rainbow Dash that invited Applejack in.

And now we have the pairing options completed, with Applejack and Rainbow Dash being in a relationship, and inviting Twilight in.

The circle of options will now be complete.

I very much like where this is going, though given that this is a Miles fic, that isn't much of a surprise.

6392221 I have not seen the one about Twilight and Applejack being in a relationship before including RD, do you think you could point me towards it?

6392666
Right here. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112508/just-a-couple-of-ponies

Best be prepared to laugh. It's going to happen.

Looks at picture
"Oh...?"
Probably read this even though I like to avoid sex tag and m rating together

I often find myself being apprehensive for RD In delicate situations, and this is shaping up to be a doozy. I look forward to the conclusion since I've enjoyed your work so far.

Awesome first comment, probably could have had first up vote if I hadn't been so busy reading 2 other long stories

Edit: after looking at the fic pic I was reminded of some things and wonder if you've read some other material I have lol

LOng time from the last chapter. Hope this means your back!

I used it once on my brother after losing an argument with him before bed. So worth it.

Hmmm... :rainbowlaugh:

Oh...Ohhhhh...Ohohohoho. So that's where you're taking this. Interesting way to go about things. Twilight is my gal so I always knew once this started up I was going to be mildly biased. But come on who doesn't love some purple horse

That being said this was quick. I don't mean that in a bad way just that it jumped from escalations very quick. I'm not sure of your plans for this little fic you have here but if there's one thing I know you can do is good internal thoughts and weaving development. There was a touch of it here and there but ultimately rather than a flowing motion it more went as if by one bullet point after another. I certainly like the premise though, and now we've the possibility of the changeling as well which will only make things even better.

I'll admit when she finally got a hang of it my head canon of Twi being a erotic novel reader just got even more confirmed. Beware the smart ones, that means they know the most. :twilightsmile:

Also...

'Alone in bed... 50 Shades of Hay... She wants to be treated like this...'

I'm watching you mister.

Its nice they´re thanking Twi for their help, love this little series

Wow, I should've read this sooner.
This sequel is both sexy and funny, especially the horny Twilight.
Too bad it's too short. More please. :twilightsmile:

7558966 A mix of life and not finding the best way to go about the next chapter.

Please give us more of this!

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