This story is a sequel to The School of Love 3: Two Diffrent Kinds of Love
Celestia was the principal at School of Love when the nurse Nurse Sombra falls in love with her. Except it's the school of Love so anythang can happen. ;)
Edited by my sister yeah~~~~~~ Say hi gertrufde No
pitchure is by Miamiswagbugg4 thx again man sorry Man but i got to remove yo picture do to issues about it bein disturbeing. :( Heres the old picture Old picture :)
woops i linked the wrong picture but i fixed it now :PPPP
Chapters (1)
Obvious troll is obvious.
That coverart is the most ugliest and odd looking one I ever seen.
4342720 Why evryon sayin im a trol????
i only writ 1 trolfic but it din't gt accepted. 
anyhow Im just a writer tryin tomake a livin. :(((
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O sorry i mite make a new one
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bee cause your knot foolin a knee wan, mate.
4342952 yeah if you want you could but you're only aloud to change grammar. i Had to fire the old edit er bcause they changed my tsory plot to much.
4342912 srry i was rude but at least not make fun of my writing man not cool broo
im trying to emprove
I spent the last ten mins laughing at your cover art. I shall not read this because of the art.
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Aw man but it;s one of my best works
I had to cover my left eye to read this
Hoo boy.
Now look at this story. Well. Uh.. I don't exactly know what to say about it.. Other than one thing:
GET A BETTER EDITOR.
Not to hurt your feels or anything. If you do writing for a living like you have stated in your previous comments, then this would not pay. Proper spelling, punctuation, spacing, grammar, and a good description to what is going on would help tremendously. If you find yourself an extremely good editor who can basically rewrite your story into something extravagant, I will say 'Nice job'. Sometimes, others opinions can really help. If they change the story's plot completely, then you should tell them to stop and just edit out the things that need to be edited. This is understandable. Though if they change just one, tiny little thing in the plot, that is not going to have your story plummet into darkness and despair. Just find a good editor, and let them do what they want. As long as they stick to the initial plot line and direction of your story.
You're going to need to supply a good story to change those down votes to up votes.
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You two should first start messaging eachother first. Have her/him send you unpublished stories or chapters. If there's a password on the stories, ask for the password, then it is your job to pick out errors and such. I'm not an editor as much as a proofreader, but I know that much.
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No problemo. I hope you do a fantastic job editing.
4343200 Then I will give it a chance.
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In all honesty, this is all over the place. I hate to be rude, but it's like something that a first grader would come up with for a homework assignment because they were lazy. It's just a bunch of things that happened. It's not really a story.
Really?
Did you just hashtag in a story?
Seriously?
All this happened in 1,000 words...
If you want help, please ask for it! We should always look to improve. And there is a lot of improvement needed for you to get a good rating.
I just want to suggest changing your story picture. A bad picture can cause people to automatically down vote a story.
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Yeah ikr thats why i chanhed it :PPPPP
it was wnice to get a good sotry about love life love happiness for a change of pace. You been writin a lot of dark spooky stories I liket this one a lot becas in the end celest and sombra are a good couple (of horses).
4343200 THIS is your best work?! Usually i'm the nice guy around here, but are you SERIOUS?! At least my stories have grammar!
4944858 no jk
Glorious.
Bad grammar stabs at my heart like a poisoned dagger.