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Lightning started his new day at his new school, at first he keeps to himself insight that he doesn't want to be that weird guy. But instead on the first day of school he meets a pony that crashed into his heart and he never even realized it, will the young Pegasus figure out his feelings, or will someone else and have a chance to change his life forever?

This is a shipping between an OC of mine and Sweetie Belle, enjoy the story. Also, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are older.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 49 )

Bit of a rushed crush but liking it so far!

4295086 Well, I'm getting back to writing so I might be a little shabby.

Lightning sighed as he sat down on his new bed, tomorrow he would start his first day at the new Ponyville High.

Okay...

Sweetie than got distracted, looking at him in a different way

That's nice

"Come on Sweetie, we all know you like me, just let it happen huh?" Danger asked.
Lightning saw this and sat up, watching.

Mmhmm

Lightning socked him in the face, than grabbed him and threw him away from Sweetie.

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That delinquent

Haven't gotten a chance to read it yet but I like the idea(seeing as I've done it in the pastXD) and I love your writing. Looking forward to reading the fuck out of this.

I love it! I feel thus going to be a great romance/ teen story! Two hooves up!

4296110 I hope you enjoy it my friend, and trust me, it's nothing like yours I promise. :pinkiehappy:

4296282 Thank you very much, will be working on it very soon

4295361 You'll understand why he is like this, soon enough. :pinkiehappy:

awesome!
i love sweetie belle stories

4307128 SWEETIE BELLE BEST PONY!!! :unsuresweetie::yay:

4308312 No argument there! :unsuresweetie: :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by The Orange Nebula deleted Apr 30th, 2014

OMG!! love this story even though I am more if a button belle you make me happy with this story so congrats!!!

4335939 Don't be so happy yet, :twilightsheepish: you'll be hating me pretty soon, :rainbowderp: I tend to make my fans angry when I screw up the story. :pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish:

4335946 ... I don't know how to respond to that... lol

4335961 Take it however you want, it's just a warning though.

Awesome! well you haven't gotten me mad yet! ;D lol ok super excited for the next chapter!!

4365900 Thanks for notifying me!


4366117 Oh, shit... XD Well you will, soon enough.

ok I have a few things to say

1. if your trying to make me mad just letting you know that it's not working.

2. yes it was violent but it made it into a great ending!

3. it would be awkward if one of them snores lol

4. still love this story!! :D

4368397 Oh, THAT wasn't the one that is going to make you mad. :ajbemused: It wasn't even HALF of what I am capable of doing. :rainbowderp: MUHAHAHA! :pinkiecrazy:

4368578 lol..ok you kinda freaked me out lol are you going to make the next chapter as fast as this one? because your able to make good chapter actually really fast :pinkiehappy:

4369213 I'm glad I freak you out. :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiehappy: and well, I don't think my mind is ready for another chapter. :fluttershyouch: But the next chapter will be out soon enough. :raritywink:

4369244 ya... your creepy and funny lol but ok I will be here when it comes out! :pinkiehappy:

AWESOME!...short... BUT AWESOME!:pinkiehappy:

4385601 God damn you're a fast reader. :derpyderp1: Thank you for reading! :heart: :pinkiehappy:

4385622 lol ya I love reading :pinkiehappy: and your so totally welcome I enjoyed reading it!:ajsmug:

What about Danger dun Dunn dunnnnnnnn :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::moustache:

4391659 Well, it was explained in the Epilogue.... :derpyderp1: I didn't think it was actually nothing... :pinkiehappy:

...Jobs?
Aren't they still foals?
Highschoolers, yea, but why go to a job when you can enjoy your childhood while you can?

4468122 It's actually very common for teens to get jobs when their families don't have enough money, I know this from my friends experience.

His eyes opened as he shook his head, than looked up to see three mares standing above him, he rubbed his eyes looking at them.
I assume you mean fillies, or at least not full-grown ponies. I'm fairly sure that mare implies full-grown, though I'm not completely certain.

:rainbowhuh:No wingboner joke for Lightning? I'm okay with this.:twilightsmile:

:raritystarry::Little Sweetie is growing up. Perhaps a little too much.

Wait... if Lightning's a foal, why does he have a job?

Is he from a third world country or something?

Or is it just because in Equestria Girls the foals were depicted as freshmen?

Awesome! I loved the Sweetie Belle song; definitely gonna subscribe their channel. :ajsmug:

ER MER GERD!!!! IZ SO GUUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Translated in to human:

I LOVE it! :pinkiehappy:

And also DANGER! DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!

Only making the Mare of the Moon giggle, watching them.

LOL Luna like WTF? :rainbowlaugh:

LOL What if Rarity suddenly like walked in. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait...

NIGHT LIGHT IS THE NAME OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE'S DAD. 0_0

Great story by the way! LOVED IT! :pinkiehappy:

Hurry somepony get the brotherhoof to kill danger befor something happens!

I sense a rape coming. And I feel the urge to strangle the offender.

6034953 It's... T for Teen... No rape involved. :rainbowlaugh:

4468122 A lot of teens get jobs in high school and this is coming from someome who is in Year 9 and still hasn't got a job but I know there are some that do.

Ok I get that the CMC are a lot older than they are in the show but I think that Sweetie Belle is growing up too fast.

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