• Member Since 22nd Apr, 2014
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Death Marches


Roses are red, Violets are blue, i suck at rhyming so fuck you. orange

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Twilight accidentally opens a portal that sucks Fluttershy inside and closes on her while she's calling for help. A year later the princesses bring the rest of the elements together for remembrance and something interesting happens.

Explosions are expected from me
If at all that a story is similar to this then i am sorry and did not know. if you leave me a message then i will either take this down or ask the writer if it is alright if i use this story

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 77 )

Well, this is different

Approval.... my god... Approval so hard O.O

Great story. I can't wait to see more.:yay:

Sounds similar to Into the Black from just the description, but I will read this and see! If it is anything like ItB, then it will be most enjoyable!

I revise my previous comment. THAT WAS AWESOME!! Holy crap you must write more of this! So much to tell, so long to wait! Have a fave and a like!

B****ing I love it

4283151 I CANT WAIT MAN ITS SO UNIQUE I NEED MORE PLS!!!!!!:fluttercry::fluttercry:

4286224 i feel like you put pinkie there just to bleep a cuss word.
Correct?

Could use some proofreading and editing to smooth out some of the ragged edges. Also, there're a few errors such as 'holding meet'. I think you meant that he was holding meat.

It is offical, Spark is starting to freak me out a little. And now I want to know how Flutters ended up this way.

4291241 all in good time. bahahahahahahaahah
also more fucked up music will follow

4291241 SINCE YOU WERE THE ONLY PERSON TO COMMENT TWICE I WILL GIVE YOU THE POWER TO PICK SPARKS LAST NAME BETWEEN TWO!!!

1.Shady
2.Death

the name will go off as front to back or back to front
Ex: Death spark, Shady spark

4291545 Well since he did freak out the guards with that stunt I say Death Spark sound great.

4291586 DING DING DING WE HAVE A WINNER AND ITS.................DEATH!!!!!!
If you have any other questions please talk to my secretary who is currently on leave for good and have a nice day.




P.s. thanks good not decide

4291621 I have a anti-rape stick and i'm not afraid to use it.

We'll.......this turn out better then expected :) so.......if spark is Death Spark does that make Flutttershy, Death Fluttershy?:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4292191 no there is only Fluttershy the eternal hell bringer of hell bringer of death and keeper of a thousand souls, Ruler of the blood lands and the god executioner.

4292191 or the one with pink hair in the corner with the kid

4292208 ooohhhhh SPOLIERS!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

4292441 ok I saw noting........(I sacred)

interesting, some spelling and grammar mistakes. Over all its good so far. make sure yiur paces doesn't go by to fast. :pinkiesmile:

I give you 4 Derpys out of 5 Derpys. :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

4301440 I know about the spelling mistakes but thanks. every time i post one i reread the others and the one i posted again. Would you like to be the proof reader?
Also what should the pets name be?

4301468 Yeah I still find mistakes on my stories... Will give you a full review once your story gets to chapter 6 and when I have time to do so... and the pets name is up to you... :derpytongue2:

4301486 No no i am letting my audience pick the name of the story. they give me there answers and i pick the best one.

4301598 I really don't have one at the moment...

.........We'll that was insain RD if fluttershy has a fucking son that can kill u with out a doubt why the fuck are u complaing?:facehoof::facehoof:

4291729 SSSSSHHHH~~~ It's ok... Just let It all happen... slowly..

Kali fits well for his theme. Without further ado That was the bloodiest thing I have read reasently.

The name should be "My Bitch".

this was gloriously evil and bloody and a good music choice for the slaughter i liked it a lot :pinkiecrazy:

little bitch
hctib elttil

changeling name

Your staring to worry me here sicne u havendet update...:fluttercry:

4334694 me writing me writing just been working on garden and playing minecraft.

4334709 OOOOOOO SRRY ITS MINECRAFT WHICH IMPORNAT it really is (I mean its more important then afterworld NO IM NO BEING SCARTISSLY )

I REFUSE TO WAIT LONGER!!! I COMMAND THEE TO FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THY GLORIOUS LITERATURE!!!! :flutterrage:

Oh boy... I have a feeling my heart's gonna be ripped out or something in the next chapter... Well! With my OC being timelord and all... Oh boy... I'm afraid... But you know what.... I LOVE YOU! :heart: :pinkiecrazy: :raritystarry: :yay:

Nice job with the name. The next chapter sounds like it will be interesting.

*gulp* let's hope for the best?:pinkiehappy:

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