Celestia and Luna have a bit a rocky history with their parents. As such, they wish to make amends by having one simple day. But with alicorns of course, nothing is simple. First fanfic here, so be kind please.
Well, this a fan of MLP who has just started to watch the show. And I like what I see!
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Let me be the first to welcome you to FIMFiction, sweetheart.
Also, you spelled alicorns wrong in the summary.
You might want to watch the episodes. Your characterization is flat and stunningly boring. There's more to them than that. Relying on fanfics to do the work for you is a really bad idea since the vast majority of fanfic writers are not very good at it.
>writes fanfiction about ponies
>has no fucking clue what the ponies really are
>using tvtropes as a reference
>don't hate me 'cause i don't know what I'm doing
Sometimes, I like to murder children and mail their body parts to their parents.
4294085 Ah thanks.
4294110 True.
4294183 And thank you for being what I feared when I showed how little I knew about the show.
4294303 Thanks for the kind words, but I really should get to watching the show as it would help build my knowledge and thus my work.
4294322 You know what, say what you will about your terrible first attempt, but at least you recognize that you were wrong in doing so and wish to improve. You have earned a little respect from me, which is rare.
You're still writing a terrible OC x Canon story, but at least you're willing to become better.
4294335 yeah, we all screw up in our first attempts, but thank you none the less.
4294303
I find him sexually arousing.
4294340 Not all of us, but we aren't perfect for sure.
4294343 Obby.
4294340
It's more that nobody can figure out why you would write fanfiction of a show you've never seen.
You're not bad technically, but you definitely need to watch an episode or two xD Your characterization is awful.
4294350 This I can explain. I, for the most part, was uniterested in the series, keeping my distance. However, as I discovered and learned to love Adventure Time by first watching the episodes to first show the Liech King, I too learned to get into this fandom by first reading the darkest one, regarded by many that is, Cupcakes. My interest was peaked, and I started to read more and more fanfictions as I started to enjoy the fandom, reading TV tropes to get better understanding of the characters and setting. I do know that to get the real and best understanding is to actually watch the show, but I am dragging my feet into doing so. I hope this explained your question.
Happy they are, but it is happiness without free will.
Not bad for your first story
4619768 Thanks for the fav and the kind words.
This is....something that I might one day come back to and fix.....
4619773 Your welcome and I will read your other stories soon. I hope you like my story
4619788 I will be checking it out soon
4619879 Alright