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Thebravenorse
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Thebravenorse
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Haven't read, but gave it a like because I know it will be good!
4302059 You know what; you have been like the most supportive follower I have, and I would just like to thank you for all your kindness and support
Peace be with you my friend.
4302090 No need to thank me. I really enjoy a lot of your work and some of it I still need to make time to read.
I love this!
Awsome
*squeals with joy*
I FINALLY FOUND ANOTHER SPINA SHIPPER OMGYAY
an for some reason the way ya wrote Luna made me think she was Scottish and I almost couldn't stop laughing
your early-modern-english needs a lot of work, and yes, that's the style you're attempting to speak there
4303321 Yea I do need to work on that
4302938 lol
I knew it! I knew I would enjoy it! Awesome work dude!
OMG!!!! Just one more like!!!! and it will be 40!!!!!
omgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!! *Takes a breath*... 40likes.... Thank you all! SO MUCH!!!... *Falls on the floor dead*
I personally like Spike x Luna ships. This was a good start of and I can't wait to read more like this.
Not bad. Luna's dialogue could use a bit of reworking, though
4311478 Yea, I agree.
not too shabby, mate, not too shabby
besides the dialogue that everyone else had pointed out, very good
rating and prize:
9/10
tiger mk 2
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4332506 Thank you for the tank!
4333107 your welcome but to let you know tank is loaded pies and pastries since it is apparently against equestrian law to give out tanks unless it is filled with food in place of real bullets.
I hate you, you troll
4333134 lol
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Amazing.
Yay, Spina!
You have a ways to go with this one. Remember to read a bit on Elizabethan grammar next time you try to imitate Luna's speech. Here are a few pointers:
Conjugation of verbs:
I do, I have
Thou dost, hast (Use colloquially between two people of equal social status, or from a higher person to lower. No one says 'thou' to refer to a king.)
He doth, hath
They, You & We do, have.
Demonstratives & such:
Here = here. Hither = To here. Hence = From here. This = the thing here
There = there. Thither = to there. Thence = from there. That = the thing there.
Yon = over there. Yonder = to over there. Yence (rare) = from over there. Yon = that thing over there.
4571834 Yea. That was my first time trying to use/write with that kind of speech. So I thank you for the pointers. :)
Hmmm
... Simple, Sweet, to the point 
... I like it!!! ANOTHER!!! 
(Laptop hits floor)... 
... ... ... NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! 
Apparently you CAN go too far with a reference. Over all, 9/10 for the Luna speech issue... Other than that! NICE!!! 
P.S. I LOVE how you used Music as an inspiration!!! I do the same! So I'm gonna recommend a song to you, and see if you get anything out of it ok? My first thought was Spike/Fluttershy, second thought was Spike/Twilight... but! whatever you do with the song is up to you!
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4769589 why emoticons, is your voice box dead?
I look down at all the other comments and see only good things from this
p.s. I havent read it yet
I think your missing a letter there, did you mean "flew towards the door,"? You have few other minor errors just remember an apostrophe denotes belonging to something or someone and without it then comes out looking like a plural version. I enjoyed the story regardless.
SO....IS THIS INCEST....I MEAN, IS LUNA HIS MOTHER, OR IS HE HER BROTHER ?????